Economics Essay

[-Evan]

So.. our economics teacher assigned us to do some small paperwork for tomorrow, and I'm not really that good at writing long essays.. so I'm wondering if some of the smart and talented people of the OTL can help me with my paper work. I've already written a couple of lines.. but it just doesn't make sense -__-. I know that it would be a piece of cake for some people here.. help please.

The topic btw is "The importance of economics on the lives of people and the developing of nations."

[XemnasXD]

do your own HW.

i swear that should be one of the rules of this section...

[Priam]

do your own HW.

i swear that should be one of the rules of this section...

You've been saying that a lot lately.

[rek]

Theres heaps to write on that.. -_-"

[-Evan]

All I needed was a little help(like pointers or so) so my essay would make sense.. I wasn't asking you guys to make it for me.

[crazyskwrls]

do ur home work! SRF needs to have a positive effect on children's learning

[chesticles]

i think he was asking for like a starting block or some key pointers.

Use google or wiki or go to a library or look at your text book.

[dom]

So.. our economics teacher assigned us to do some small paperwork for tomorrow, and I'm not really that good at writing long essays.. so I'm wondering if some of the smart and talented people of the OTL can help me with my paper work. I've already written a couple of lines.. but it just doesn't make sense -__-. I know that it would be a piece of cake for some people here.. help please.

The topic btw is "The importance of economics on the lives of people and the developing of nations."

In less then 30 seconds (literally)

intro
+economics is important in our world
-effects the lives of people

development
here you talk about how important it has become
+the new church + state
-economics has become of religious proportions
-eg: wall street is the new vatican/mecca

here you talk about how it has become too important
+economics is globalization
-the fluidity our the money world makes our world smaller and interdependant
-eg: it makes nations more vulnerable to disaster, what is national has become international

here you talk about how it negatively affects developing nations
+it has thus become a competition
-where those who do not make the podium are victim of inegality and the poor get poorer
-eg: developing nations lack the resources to develop, where developed nations line their pockets

conclusion
+nations at which we looked towards for cheap labor are begining to take over the world economy
-poor planning and short foresight will prove to be our demise

[-Evan]

That helped a lot. Thanks. Mods can close this topic now.

Edit: Call me dumb, but I'm having a hard time understanding this lines. Sorry, English isn't my primary language so I'm kinda having a hard time understanding some phrases.

"it makes nations more vulnerable to disaster, what is national has become international"


"developing nations lack the resources to develop, where developed nations line their pockets"

[dom]

"it makes nations more vulnerable to disaster, what is national has become international"

Stuff like droughts in Asia affect EVERYONE's price for food, because we depend on them to grow rice.

If there was instability (like a war) in countries like Saudi Arabia, they matter so much that not only the price, but the availability of oil would be affected.

Because of economics, one country's problems is the worlds problems.

"developing nations lack the resources to develop, where developed nations line their pockets"

Developing nations can't make money because they have no money to make money with. Rich countries aren't sharing the money, and keep getting richer.

[-Evan]

Thanks to Dom's pointers. Gonna pass it tomorrow.


Feel free to close it now.