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a poem thread, yay for fun

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:44 pm
by PsYch008
ok, so RuYi said she is good at poems, so i made up one off the top of my head. and now i am gonna make a thread. (i didnt mean to make that rhyme)

anyway, this is a thread where you can make a poem off the top of your head. (omg wtf is up with the rhyming)

here is mine...

water pwns, waters nice, comes from springs, turns to ice. you can drink it, you can spray it, but whatever you do, do not betray it.


your turn :-D

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:48 pm
by AllEyezOnMe
Yes no, yes no, yes no.

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:49 pm
by AllEyezOnMe
Yes no, yes no, yes no.

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:51 pm
by TacticalMedic
Psycho rockz, Psycho pwnz, and though I dont know him the story still goes. His sig is so hot, I hate when its laggy ( :D ), no matter the black, same for his avy. And just to complete it before i go,all I can say here is simply LOL! :D :D :D

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:56 pm
by Zypher
Image

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:56 pm
by PsYch008
TacticalMedic wrote:Psycho rockz, Psycho pwnz, and though I dont know him the story still goes. His sig is so hot, I hate when its laggy ( :D ), no matter the black, same for his avy. And just to complete it before i go,all I can say here is simply LOL! :D :D :D


very nice homie *high five*

my name is Jason btw. nice to meet you :-P

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:57 pm
by PsYch008
Zypher wrote:Image


ROFL!!! :love: :love: Zypher, marry me. :-D

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:02 pm
by TacticalMedic
PsYch008 wrote:
very nice homie *high five*

my name is Jason btw. nice to meet you :-P


*high-fives back* Pleasure to meet ya, homies call me Pete :P

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:04 pm
by Zypher
<3333
im kevin:[

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:10 pm
by PsYch008
Kevins the man.

nice to meet ya Pete. how old are you? and do ya like to toke the greens? if so, come on ova. hehe.

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:10 pm
by TacticalMedic
Imma have another try before I got to bed :P
Here it goes...

Every now and then, when I hunt at mujigis
a retard comes around, begging for ciggies :D
I tell him to go because those are my last
before he finds them up in his arse.
So there he stayes killing my mobs
But I laugh and continue on
Half an hour goes,hes still there,
Im sick of pretending I dont care.
I tell him, listen now, you lifeless scum
leave ma place before I call ma homie Jason 8)
He goes like, LOL just give me a ciggare
and Ill leave ya alone without any harm
He hits me once, going bright purpple
thats what I wanted and hit the TAB button.
He is like, whoa, i betta get out
thats when the crit pulls him straight down.
And why do you think I wrote this here
To tell you the moral that ciggies do KILL

Admit it, I have tallent (of a nubber >.<)

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:11 pm
by PsYch008
ok lets get back on topic here buddies. POEMS! hehe.

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:15 pm
by Anh_Hung_Rom
I pray
For the day
when Jason and the boys
Stop being gay.

:P

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:16 pm
by Zypher
there goes the power rangers
oh wait oh dangers dangers
to save the city
from evil mr ity bity!
here comes jason and kevin
flying high from the skys of heaven
what chu gonna do
to get away from these twoooo







lollllllllllllllllllz
isuxx0rs

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:30 pm
by TacticalMedic
Lol, thats goin so cool that Im not going to bed before I write another one :P

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:32 pm
by Blackchocob0
Whats that
In the sky?
A bird,
A fly!

Doin' a dance
That you got
No chance to enhance
It's a chocobo,
Oh my!

Cool as a cat
But not quite
so fat,
I'm blacker
Than black,
Cause for a chocobo
That's phat!

Lol that took me like 5 mins to think up. If I try I can make a damn good poem. Yes I know I'm modest.

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:54 pm
by TacticalMedic
Feeling confused of alchemy and sh!t?
Begging your father to buy you some silk :D
Depressed by the bot that steals your spot
and sick of the nubber asking for gold?
No worries from now on
TacticalMedic is here.
Curing the sick
with a bottle of beer.
So whenever you feel like having some fun
with Kevin and Jason, light up the blunt.
And when you get up there, sky-high
Tell my man, saint Peter, I said HI
I am so sleepy, I cant think anymore
Just prepare for the comeback when I sleep some more.... :oops:

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:56 pm
by Draquish
I'm sitting here grinding, with my music on.
When suddenly I notice, that something has gone wrong.
The mobs dissapeared, and the chat box has stopped scrolling.
I can't click anywhere; where the heck am I going?
A box pops up, now I now see the connection.
I have just suffered, a bad case of disconnection.



:D

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:56 pm
by PsYch008
woot keep em comin boyz. ill be back later, im goin home from work

to home i go, and this i flow, you know fo sho, that i will show. tomorrow. :-P

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:56 pm
by PsYch008
draquish wrote:I'm sitting here grinding, with my music on.
When suddenly I notice, that something has gone wrong.
The mobs dissapeared, and the chat box has stopped scrolling.
I can't click anywhere; where the heck am I going?
A box pops up, now I now see the connection.
I have just suffered, a bad case of disconnection.



:D


very nice draq. :)

Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 10:59 pm
by Draquish
DraQ :love: 's ze poemz~

I approve of this thread. :D

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:19 am
by LadyOphelia
So I'm not really traditional when it comes to poetry, I just write poetically...

Here's a little somethin from my DevArt

We must keep reminding ourselves of hard times and past-times, memories long ago forgotten. And just when we grasp a concept, unclear of the meaning, we are overwhelmed with joy. Like tasting sweet candy for the first time, like taking your first steps proudly staggering across the room to grab the broom and sweep away past thoughts of never being able to stand on your own two feet and never being afraid to speak out to the world that will one day embrace you, but will always love you. We struggle because there is hope and we have it like a dream waiting to become true, a star waiting to be wished upon by you.

i :love: to write :D

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:51 am
by Blackchocob0
Ophelia I used to wrote that kind of thing more often than anything else. I never thought of it as poetry...I could never figure out exactly where it belonged, in fact. Heh heh...but I like that. Very unique style of writing - the attempt to put into fancy, super-intelligent sounding writing one's thoughts on ideals and concepts. :P

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:15 pm
by LadyOphelia
Blackchocob0 wrote:Ophelia I used to wrote that kind of thing more often than anything else. I never thought of it as poetry...I could never figure out exactly where it belonged, in fact. Heh heh...but I like that. Very unique style of writing - the attempt to put into fancy, super-intelligent sounding writing one's thoughts on ideals and concepts. :P


Wow, someone who understand my technique :P

Would love to read some of your stuff some day :) And thanks!

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:40 pm
by Stress
This is the best I could think of:

Right now I'm thinking of making a rhyme,
But I can't write anything... it's a crime.
'cause my dreams have been shattered and I am in grief
After she left, I have lost all belief.

My heart is hurt, my feelings are hurt,
My whole existence is downright hurt.
You were just everything for me,
And I put all of my faith in thee.

Now, I know what was really behind
Your so-called friendship: you made me blind
And I couldn't actually see
That you didn't really want to be with me.

It was someone else all the time...
And for you, I wasn't even worth a dime.
But this abuse has come to an end;
My suffering will no longer extend.

-> hope you like it :)

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:09 pm
by MonstaH
Jumpin' thru da crib, PsYch008 broke his rib!

Yea Boi !

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:42 pm
by Luoma
draquish wrote:I'm sitting here grinding, with my music on.
When suddenly I notice, that something has gone wrong.
The mobs dissapeared, and the chat box has stopped scrolling.
I can't click anywhere; where the heck am I going?
A box pops up, now I now see the connection.
I have just suffered, a bad case of disconnection.



:D


great poem! :D

Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 3:39 pm
by Zak
I thought this said yay poekmon thread. lol
<------ Pokemon: Serious buisness

Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:35 pm
by Draquish
    Decisions

Everyone makes them, whether they like it or not.
It may be to become an astronaut, or to start smoking pot.
They are what makes us, or what sometimes breaks us.
And once in a while, they may cause a great fuss.
But remember dear friend, practice revision.
Each and every time you make a decision.





DraQ :love: 's ze poems!! :D


That was just a quick poem to use as an excuse to revive this thread ^_^

Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:25 am
by Stress
draquish wrote:
    Decisions
Everyone makes them, whether they like it or not.
It may be to become an astronaut, or to start smoking pot.
They are what makes us, or what sometimes breaks us.
And once in a while, they may cause a great fuss.
But remember dear friend, practice revision.
Each and every time you make a decision.





DraQ :love: 's ze poems!! :D


That was just a quick poem to use as an excuse to revive this thread ^_^


That's nice, Draquish. Maybe I can come up with something better then my first one I posted here... :(