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I felt EMO today so I wrote this poem to my GF:

I know I'm not good with words.
But I must be heard.
I feel really corny while writing all of this.
But there is too much stuff that I need to express.
Out of all the girls I've had, you seem to be the best.
There is something about you, you are not like the rest.
I'm so freaking whipped, I feel like a bitch.
You are the one girl, in a long time, that I don't want to ditch.
Just 30 minutes, that'll be enough.
To have me thinking about you, till the moon rises up.
You are like the drug I've never tried.
Better than Pot, and Crystal Meth combined.
Even though a guy like me doesn't deserve you.
I just wanted a simple way to tell you.
Today.
That I plan on loving you; till the end of my days.






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EMO

its good i guess but i dont really know cuz i dont read poetry

btw very nice sig. write a tut

Yep... you turned EMO

Hopeless pal, commit suicide right away..

sad case

to tell u the truth ... it kinda suked. ur GF will find it cute and all but the actual structure of the poem kinda blew. but decent words IMO. to bad most didnt rhyme.

Poems don't need to rhyme you know.

I thought it was quite good. I didnt know you felt this way about me Draq

Tytyty.

This poem was done @ 2AM in ze morning...I was sleepy!

AND YOU SAID I "LOOKED" emo??




Oh really now?

It was pretty good....lol

MastaChiefX wrote:AND YOU SAID I "LOOKED" emo??




Oh really now?

You ARE emo...

You still haven't told me what you thought of the poem

nice, very

I feel you dawg.

But "I feel like a bitch" sounds just wrong. Who knows, you gf might dig it more than I do.

Poetry and music is the best way to get to a soul, really. Good luck.

pretty good for a poem imo, very romantic ^^

Write another one and you can join Faithless