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English corseworkk
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:41 pm
by DistortedMind
Got some corsework today and i need to plan a short story
any one got any ideas of what i can do me short story on
this would help if you put it like
1 story starts (intro)
2
3
4
5 story ends (ending)
thanks for your time =]
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:44 pm
by Snoopy
I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you
.
I knew I was uncreative though.
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:46 pm
by DistortedMind
Snoopy wrote:I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you
.
I knew I was uncreative though.
yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:53 pm
by Snoopy
DistortedMind wrote:Snoopy wrote:I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you
.
I knew I was uncreative though.
yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL
Yeah. If we don't hand a draft in, we basically get a fail, and I was away with a cold in the middle of summer so I took a week off school. Then because I didn't have a doctors certificate I couldn't apply for an extension ;l sucks.
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:54 pm
by DistortedMind
Snoopy wrote:DistortedMind wrote:Snoopy wrote:I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you
.
I knew I was uncreative though.
yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL
Yeah. If we don't hand a draft in, we basically get a fail, and I was away with a cold in the middle of summer so I took a week off school. Then because I didn't have a doctors certificate I couldn't apply for an extension ;l sucks.
AWW thats pretty unlucky
i just need some ideas on what to base my story on :>
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:59 pm
by Snoopy
You could base it on something that happened to you, your friend, someone in your family etc.
You could even read a book and base it on something similar to that, just with a twist at the end.
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:01 pm
by DistortedMind
you know what my teacher said the same
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:08 pm
by Snoopy
Yes. Well what I would do is fill out a plan type thing.
I.E.
Paragraph 1: <Insert what's going to happen here>
until you get to Paragraph 5/6 which would usually in a short story be your twist.
We're also told to put lots of C3 comments (Criteria 3 Comments - Comments relating to how society perceives someone or something). I.E. Society rejects/challenges/reinforces someone or something.
It's hard to explain.
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 8:09 am
by takolin
Snoopy wrote:DistortedMind wrote:Snoopy wrote:I had a similar task, except I had to base mine on a poem. Basically I failed with a D10 (D+) so I won't bother trying to help you
.
I knew I was uncreative though.
yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL
Yeah. If we don't hand a draft in, we basically get a fail, and I was away with a cold in the middle of summer so I took a week off school. Then because I didn't have a doctors certificate I couldn't apply for an extension ;l sucks.
You take a week of for a cold?
That's sad.
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 8:12 am
by Snoopy
takolin wrote:Snoopy wrote:DistortedMind wrote:yeah it sucks seriosly i had some corsework last week and i didnt hand it in and my teacher was pissed LOL
Yeah. If we don't hand a draft in, we basically get a fail, and I was away with a cold in the middle of summer so I took a week off school. Then because I didn't have a doctors certificate I couldn't apply for an extension ;l sucks.
You take a week of for a cold?
That's sad.
Yeah. I did. Sure it's sad. I don't care.
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:25 am
by satman83
1 story starts (intro)
2man walks down street
3man pushes someone to the floor looks like he is attacking them
4man is then shown to have saved the persons life from falling building work
5 story ends (ending)
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:40 am
by Breed
My friend wrote about a time he got alcohol poisoning.
Wne tlike this:
1. Sets up scene
2.Explains finishing boring night
3. Explains reasoning for drink a bottle of vodka in one go by representing his mind and options with a magical dragon and wizard.
4. Repurcussions of consumption
5. Hospital
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:13 pm
by CrimsonNuker
Your life story on the internet.
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:55 pm
by DistortedMind
CrimsonNuker wrote:Your life story on the internet.
if i done that it would be POOOP
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 8:13 pm
by satman83
DistortedMind wrote:CrimsonNuker wrote:Your life story on the internet.
if i done that it would be POOOP
True...but your teachers would love it
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:21 pm
by ThatBluePerson
What is a "corseworkk"?
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:30 pm
by MrJoey
What in the fuck... Has OTL become study hall, or has everyone just gotten more retarded? Numerous threads about homework, essays, math, etc... If you're a student, look in your damn textbook, and figure out the answer yourself, if you can't, you're taking the wrong classes.
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 9:00 pm
by DistortedMind
errr STFU i just wanted some ideas thats wll jeesh man
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:00 pm
by IceCrash
seriously joey, chill lol
isn't off topic lounge to just chill and talk about wtf u wanna talk about?
socialize a little? >.<''
just relax
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:11 pm
by Squirt
DistortedMind wrote:Got some corsework today and i need to plan a short story
any one got any ideas of what i can do me short story on
this would help if you put it like
1 story starts (intro)
Man plans to go back in time and stop himelf from being born
2
Details
3
More detail of his plan
4
Meets a young woman ends up getting her prego
5 story ends (ending)
He is the father of the man who created the time machine.
thanks for your time =]
Understand where I'm going with this?
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 1:31 pm
by DistortedMind
Squirt wrote:DistortedMind wrote:Got some corsework today and i need to plan a short story
any one got any ideas of what i can do me short story on
this would help if you put it like
1 story starts (intro)
Man plans to go back in time and stop himelf from being born
2
Details
3
More detail of his plan
4
Meets a young woman ends up getting her prego
5 story ends (ending)
He is the father of the man who created the time machine.
thanks for your time =]
Understand where I'm going with this?
Thats Good dude i might take that into thought
Re: English corseworkk
Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 4:01 pm
by Squirt
No problem =)