Draquish's Poem.

Draquish · Post by **Draquish** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:33 am

I felt EMO today so I wrote this poem to my GF:

I know I'm not good with words.
But I must be heard.
I feel really corny while writing all of this.
But there is too much stuff that I need to express.
Out of all the girls I've had, you seem to be the best.
There is something about you, you are not like the rest.
I'm so freaking whipped, I feel like a bitch.
You are the one girl, in a long time, that I don't want to ditch.
Just 30 minutes, that'll be enough.
To have me thinking about you, till the moon rises up.
You are like the drug I've never tried.
Better than Pot, and Crystal Meth combined.
Even though a guy like me doesn't deserve you.
I just wanted a simple way to tell you.
Today.
That I plan on loving you; till the end of my days.

Rate!

rek · Post by **rek** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 6:47 am

EMO

its good i guess but i dont really know cuz i dont read poetry :roll:

btw very nice sig. write a tut :wink:

[SD]Twysta · Post by **[SD]Twysta** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:38 am

Yep... you turned EMO

Hopeless pal, commit suicide right away..

sad case

bowner · Post by **bowner** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:30 pm

to tell u the truth ... it kinda suked. ur GF will find it cute and all but the actual structure of the poem kinda blew. but decent words IMO. to bad most didnt rhyme.

ziddy1232 · Post by **ziddy1232** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:36 pm

Poems don't need to rhyme you know.

I thought it was quite good. I didnt know you felt this way about me Draq

Draquish · Post by **Draquish** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:15 pm

Tytyty.

This poem was done @ 2AM in ze morning...I was sleepy!

MastaChiefX · Post by **MastaChiefX** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:57 pm

AND YOU SAID I "LOOKED" emo??

Oh really now?

Tasdik · Post by **Tasdik** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:02 pm

It was pretty good....lol

Draquish · Post by **Draquish** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:34 pm

MastaChiefX wrote:AND YOU SAID I "LOOKED" emo??

Oh really now?

You ARE emo...

You still haven't told me what you thought of the poem

Jabo · Post by **Jabo** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:45 pm

nice, very

Anh_Hung_Rom · Post by **Anh_Hung_Rom** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:07 pm

I feel you dawg.

But "I feel like a bitch" sounds just wrong. Who knows, you gf might dig it more than I do.

Poetry and music is the best way to get to a soul, really. Good luck.

Luoma · Post by **Luoma** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:31 pm

pretty good for a poem imo, very romantic ^^

Pan_Raider(`_´) · Post by **Pan_Raider(`_´)** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:36 pm

Write another one and you can join Faithless