a new track by your not so neighborhood spider... uh, i mean

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Sun Dec 25, 2011 3:43 pm

what's up!? got myself making a new track last night, don't give me too much shit, as i explained in my other post... my computer is GARBAGE at the moment, and, being a computer tech, i know that there is nothing i can do to help it besides eventually put it out of it's misery... that being said...

merry christmas to all, and to all a new song that i am working on! hehehe. comments please. thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/crowetic/tirablitions

poehalcho · Post by **poehalcho** » Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:13 pm

You've definitely improved, compared to what your music used to be. There's a few things I notice though...
1. You use a cheap sounding drum (the one you can clearly hear in the beginning)
2. There's no 'drop'. every song has a moment where it goes whack... it's just kinda boring without it.
3. you put different melodies with the same beat in one song. It's strange and you have little reason to still consider it to be one track. Try adding to your music without changing the melody.

On the other hand, you've greatly improved in keeping you're song stick to it's beat. I remember long ago you posted some songs where your melody was straying greatly from the lead of the rhythm. I don't notice that error anymore :sohappy:

btw, do you still have that song around that you created when you were just screwing around?

ps. sorry, still haven't made a vid with your other song :[

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:03 pm

thank you, yea, i have many other plans, however my computer is so slow, i kinda get tired of doing what i know needs to be done to improve the song, once i get a new machine, and get some sequencers and mixer you will notice an immediately definite sound difference.

which song are you talking about? I don't have much of my old music, a lot of it was lost when i was arrested.

poehalcho · Post by **poehalcho** » Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:32 pm

PsYch008 wrote:thank you, yea, i have many other plans, however my computer is so slow, i kinda get tired of doing what i know needs to be done to improve the song, once i get a new machine, and get some sequencers and mixer you will notice an immediately definite sound difference.

which song are you talking about? I don't have much of my old music, a lot of it was lost when i was arrested.

All I remember is that it was a short song (1:30~2:45-ish). I recall telling you it was your best one, even though you were just screwing about with your software. I tihnk it might've been the 2nd or 3rd so you ever posted... :yay:

I think I managed to find it once... somewhere, through srf.
I'll look into it...

EDIT:
Found it. It's on your MySpace. I still really Like that one XD
Please try to make a remix of that one. It has a lot of potential.
It's this one. messin around for a min (almst literally

Notice how the melody keeps the same formula, just changes effects to keep it fresh. There's some beat inconsistency and it obviously isn't finished yet, but I really think it could turn out great if you attempt to remake it.

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:30 am

ah yes, that one, see, that was when i at least had a decent computer, still had already lost my dj equipment :banghead:

but i will get it back... meanwhile, this is what i am working on RIGHT NOW...

http://soundcloud.com/crowetic/drizko

let me know what you think so far... this computer pisses me off.

poehalcho · Post by **poehalcho** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:58 am

It's better than tirablitions, so far anyway. The intro was a little strange and too long for it's own good. I also notice beat-melody desynchronization, so try to time your bassline fluctuations with the beats properly.

For the intro try using this songs build-up as your inspiration (after 1:23) to make it connect.

That's what I'd recommend anyway

Other than that. Do you think you can try to describe this new style you are aiming for? It'll help me evaluate your pieces better and help you keep your goals in sight.

One final word of advice, You need better naming XD. Don't think too much about the names, it makes it look like you're trying way too hard. Names like 'messin around for a min (almst literally' are a lot better, because they describe the song better.

/sleep now.

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 4:11 am

lol, literally my song names i don't think at all, i just type random shit from the top of my head, usually make up words. the last thing i am doing is thinking.

as for the sync issues, yea, i know, i need some hardware, you know, knobs, and buttons. hehe.

also the computer is so slow, it aggravates me too much to make anything perfect right now.

the style i would say... i guess... "trance step" or something of that nature, not really sure exactly where i wanna go style wise until i get new hardware and get into a real groove.

i am on a lil netbook right now, however, i will check out that song tomorrow. good night!

Post by **dom** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:44 am

I only made it to ~20 seconds.

Sounded like two pepsi cans having unprotected anal sex.

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 3:08 pm

http://soundcloud.com/crowetic/drizko-1

updated. like i said i am posting here to get feedback so that i can make changes lol. dom.

poehalcho · Post by **poehalcho** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 4:54 pm

Intro is a little better now. I also kind of like the sound you've added at 1:28, but the tune need to go higher instead of lower.

Let's communicate using Keybored

http://www.ziddu.com/download/2665773/K ... 0.zip.html
It's a little app that turns your keyboard in to a variety of musical instruments. For my example set it to electric bass (pick) and press zzzzxxxxcccccccc (note that shift produces different sounds)

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:06 pm

http://soundcloud.com/crowetic/dubsit

and then...

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:08 pm

cool, i downloaded that lil proggie. hehe.

here... just did this messing around...

http://soundcloud.com/crowetic/dubsit

Toshiharu · Post by **Toshiharu** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:09 pm

Not a big fan of wubwubstep, but it was alright for my ears. I expected more intense wubwub.

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:15 pm

Toshiharu wrote:Not a big fan of wubwubstep, but it was alright for my ears. I expected more intense wubwub.

cool, thanks, i was just messin around for a few mins, i seem to have a hard time sticking to one song and finishing it all the way through, but i also need more hardware and a better computer, so yea. lol.

Miguez · Post by **Miguez** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:18 pm

Where's the drop? Dubstep is all about a good drop

But it was cool, you could make something pretty neat from this, maybe add some voice samples aswell.

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:27 pm

Miguez wrote:Where's the drop? Dubstep is all about a good drop

But it was cool, you could make something pretty neat from this, maybe add some voice samples aswell.

yes, i know, however i did this in about 20 mins, i have no patience for my shitty computer, but yes, vocals and a drop should be added. hehe.

Post by **Gaigemasta** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:36 pm

lol nah not copying PsYch008, but I've been working on this for about a week now and I figured I'd like to get C&C on this so I can make it best I can

It's not finished, and I have to add more dialog in it

But the I want to make where gohan goes ssj2 and kicks CeLL's ass in all one song

http://www.gaigetech.com/dragonstep%20z.mp3

*url replaced for faster speeds*

jleyens · Post by **jleyens** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:37 pm

Not bad for a first try, but is it really needed to created another thread for every song you make? Might want to stick to one topic.

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:52 pm

jleyens wrote:Not bad for a first try, but is it really needed to created another thread for every song you make? Might want to stick to one topic.

meh. i needs attentions. I R offtopic. heh.

*BlackFox · Post by *BlackFox » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:55 pm

Well, the song stops playing for a few seconds.. and it will continue for a 10 seconds or so
and stop again.. lulz what's wrong?

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:55 pm

Gaigemasta wrote:lol nah not copying PsYch008, but I've been working on this for about a week now and I figured I'd like to get C&C on this so I can make it best I can

It's not finished, and I have to add more dialog in it

But the I want to make where gohan goes ssj2 and kicks CeLL's ass in all one song

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/54251329/dragonstep%20z.mp3

i like it, good job! See what happens when you actually put some time into shit as opposed to me, making a new song every 30 mins, and never mastering anything. ADD ftw. lol.

Post by **Gaigemasta** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:58 pm

lol, nah

what software are you using btw? Maybe we can share some ideas

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:01 pm

can we just make this the official ADD YOUR TRACK thread?

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:03 pm

*BlackFox wrote:Well, the song stops playing for a few seconds.. and it will continue for a 10 seconds or so
and stop again.. lulz what's wrong?

you've gots the LAGS!

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:04 pm

Gaigemasta wrote:lol, nah

what software are you using btw? Maybe we can share some ideas

I am currently using solely FL studio 10 producer edition...

however, i am planning on learning ableton better when i get a new computer, as well as pro tools.

sharing ideas, is always fun, we can pass the track back and forth like a dirty whore if we both use the same software.

jleyens · Post by **jleyens** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:05 pm

No doubt about the attention part, you made that obvious. The other part, is fully wrong. It's not about you and your songs, stick to one thread and stick to facebook if you need to be showered with attention.

Post by **Gaigemasta** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:07 pm

lol idk if I like triple posts XD

but I use FL studio, mixcraft, and free audio editor

PsYch008 · Post by **PsYch008** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:08 pm

jleyens wrote:No doubt about the attention part, you made that obvious. The other part, is fully wrong. It's not about you and your songs, stick to one thread and stick to facebook if you need to be showered with attention.

chill, i am messing around. friend.

and yea, if you have fl, then let's collab sometime.

Website · Post by **satman83** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:08 pm

I have to say I like both songs. Although they arnt really the types of songs i normally listen to....otherwise good job guys :sohappy:

*BlackFox · Post by *BlackFox » Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:14 pm

I'm not really "into" dubstep.. But It wasn't that bad. :giveup:

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