Feedback on a song + added a less noisy song

[Gnarly]

this is beat, not song try to make something behind the beats, all i heard is beats

Yes, i already said it was a beat

Yo dudes, dudettes
Me and my friend made a beat(but in a different way) and we'd like it if you guys could give us some feedback. We both just started making music so don't expect much.

Anyway, big thanks to everyone who commented and gave us feedback and took the time to listen (:

[Draquish]

Anyway, big thanks to everyone who commented and gave us feedback and took the time to listen (:

Thank YOU for the feedback, sir.

[dom]

Anyway, big thanks to everyone who commented and gave us feedback and took the time to listen (:

Thank YOU for the feedback, sir.

When I read this, I went back to the first page and read your original post; I lol'd.

[antics]

That's not music. That's noise.

+1

this is techno?

edit:
seems like too much is going on some times the simpler the better

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[Miguez]

^What he said.

After listening to the second one I must say you should try something more simplier, there are too many noises going on at the same time, but you've got potential

[Melez]

It still really depends on what genre of electronic music he wants to go at. Electro beats don't automatically mean techno dance.. things.