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NsR - Fairy
Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:19 am
by MrAzura
Here is my second sig.
C&C Pliz mens.
Re: NsR - Fairy
Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:24 am
by magisuns
the text and the ?colour of the magic thingy? kill it somewhat. I dunno about if the colour of the thingy does but that text has got to go. Try taking the text out
other than those 2 things it looks pretty good. 68% from me
Re: NsR - Fairy
Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:41 am
by Melez
Well, for a second sig, it's very good. Has a good flow (I think
).
On the other hand, the text is not good. Try making it more simple, usually works.
Overall good piece, 7.5/10 from me.
KIU.
Re: NsR - Fairy
Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 8:14 pm
by MrAzura
Ok so here is my second attempt.
Re: NsR - Fairy
Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 8:34 pm
by Melez
Darker, more to my style.
The text is definetly better. In upcoming sigs that you're gonna make (I hope) find a better spot for the text, not on your focal point. Though in this case it fills the sig. 8/10 now. KIU.