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Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:12 am
by Amelie
too much coffee, therefore cant sleep.
However i made this, i found it cute.

Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:18 am
by Verfo
the background is awesome imo, but the render is too small, make it bigger and dont show the whole render just the top part, 8/10, keep up the good work.
Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:23 am
by Hostage
Verfo wrote:the background is awesome imo, but the render is too small, make it bigger and dont show the whole render just the top part, 8/10, keep up the good work.
I would avoid that if I were you it looks fine the way it is, maybe just work on the text a little and blend her in a bit, other then that fantastic work.
My reason being to not change the render is because of the direction she is facing, if you scaled her up and her back is turned to the audience, it would look odd. Besides with her at this size the c4d is working to add great flow. KIU ^^
PS, second glance. Nice lighting.
Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 6:59 am
by rek
Awesome. Just work on the text. kiu
Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 7:09 am
by MasterKojito
Don't listen to rek, the text is great

. Great work, 7/10

Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 8:53 am
by Melez
Nice, but get the render bigger. And a bit better blend would be good, too. KIU

Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 2:21 pm
by Amelie
thx for your replies guys

Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 2:32 pm
by cin
i like it a lot amelie.
only 2 things; i think it would be better if some of the
"smoke", or whatever i can call your background effects,
would go in front of the render. this might add up to the
depth of the sig.
second is that i like the text already, but i think it
could look even better if you would have less space in
the vertical direction. so basically putting "pure off-
ering" and "Rosseau" closer to eachother.
other than that, great job ame

Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 2:41 pm
by Amelie
ty baby

, i'll try to work on that when i get back in my place.
Re: Was Bored
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 6:46 pm
by IceCrash
cin wrote:i like it a lot amelie.
only 2 things; i think it would be better if some of the
"smoke", or whatever i can call your background effects,
would go in front of the render. this might add up to the
depth of the sig.
second is that i like the text already, but i think it
could look even better if you would have less space in
the vertical direction. so basically putting "pure off-
ering" and "Rosseau" closer to eachother.
other than that, great job ame

agreed
really like the sig amelie KIU