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NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:22 pm
by Barotix
Sig request for X-Lax

Barotix wrote:Image
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CnC =]

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 5:30 pm
by Melez
V2

Only thing I don't like is the background... Somehow doesn't fit with the character. Still, simple and nice.

7.5/10

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:44 am
by huejas
i think v3 (the text between v1 and v2) :)

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 2:06 am
by Verfo
imo, its too plain

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:46 am
by lavapockets
:love: :love: :love: that render....but it def needs a little something more. BTW, did you get that one from planet renders? I was looking for EP renders the other day and I saw they have a pino one, but I didn't see this one :(

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 5:56 am
by Barotix
it was on planet renders.

I tried fixing the space problem, ended up with a blur problem >_>
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Fixed?
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Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 7:29 am
by Melez
Barotix wrote:it was on planet renders.

I tried fixing the space problem, ended up with a blur problem >_>
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Fixed?
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V1 now, better. Still don't like the color of the background, though.

Nice, KIU.

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 11:22 am
by LM
I'm sorry but it ruined an awesome anime series.

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:48 pm
by K a R e E m
V1 in the second set look good
but still very plain background need to be fixes and u need A font that suit the render
maybe bleeding cowboys font :)

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 3:59 pm
by lavapockets
Dang, well I didn't see it :D I'll have to look again.

Anywho, try to add a bit of color, a color filter, some gradients, maybe a c4d or two, something to make her stand out from the background. Something like the blue color of the eyeshadow she wears would be kick ass.

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:13 pm
by Barotix
lavapockets wrote:Dang, well I didn't see it :D I'll have to look again.

Anywho, try to add a bit of color, a color filter, some gradients, maybe a c4d or two, something to make her stand out from the background. Something like the blue color of the eyeshadow she wears would be kick ass.


So that's what I was missing. The render wasn't "popping."

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:19 pm
by lavapockets
Barotix wrote:So that's what I was missing. The render wasn't "popping."


Yea..it was kind of blending into your background. More depth -.- but that's and issue I have too. I would make suggestions but I'm still working on that hehehehe