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NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:22 pm
by Barotix
Sig request for X-Lax
Barotix wrote:
OR

CnC =]
Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 5:30 pm
by Melez
V2
Only thing I don't like is the background... Somehow doesn't fit with the character. Still, simple and nice.
7.5/10
Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:44 am
by huejas
i think v3 (the text between v1 and v2)

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 2:06 am
by Verfo
imo, its too plain
Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:46 am
by lavapockets
Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 5:56 am
by Barotix
it was on planet renders.
I tried fixing the space problem, ended up with a blur problem >_>

Fixed?

OR

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 7:29 am
by Melez
Barotix wrote:it was on planet renders.
I tried fixing the space problem, ended up with a blur problem >_>

Fixed?

OR

V1 now, better. Still don't like the color of the background, though.
Nice, KIU.
Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 11:22 am
by LM
I'm sorry but it ruined an awesome anime series.
Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:48 pm
by K a R e E m
V1 in the second set look good
but still very plain background need to be fixes and u need A font that suit the render
maybe bleeding cowboys font

Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 3:59 pm
by lavapockets
Dang, well I didn't see it

I'll have to look again.
Anywho, try to add a bit of color, a color filter, some gradients, maybe a c4d or two, something to make her stand out from the background. Something like the blue color of the eyeshadow she wears would be kick ass.
Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:13 pm
by Barotix
lavapockets wrote:Dang, well I didn't see it

I'll have to look again.
Anywho, try to add a bit of color, a color filter, some gradients, maybe a c4d or two, something to make her stand out from the background. Something like the blue color of the eyeshadow she wears would be kick ass.
So that's what I was missing. The render wasn't "popping."
Re: NSR - Ergo Proxy
Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:19 pm
by lavapockets
Barotix wrote:So that's what I was missing. The render wasn't "popping."
Yea..it was kind of blending into your background. More depth -.- but that's and issue I have too. I would make suggestions but I'm still working on that hehehehe