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Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 5:49 pm
by Flightmeck
Hi
I'm looking for a little feedback on my latest creation. It's a simple one but i kinda like it... Don't know what it is with the japanese cherry but i just love it. The two men sitting is actually a little statue we have at home and i like that too. ^_^
So what do you think? (And please no "That's nothing special with it i can make one just like that in 5 min." comments please).

I see that it might bee a little big to use as a sig. but whatever ^_^. If I make it smaller it'll be hard to see what's in it (I think).
@ Verfo

I personally don't think it's as good in B&W but that's just me... ^_^
Edit:
@RogueKiller

There ya go! Deleted the flower and tried to add more depth. In my opinion it looks kina cool too but then it's a "new" pic.
Edit:
So i made one without any background too:

and the 2nd version

Edit again:
@ Cin
Was this what you meant? If not please explain a little more in detail ^^ My english might not bee that good so i might have misunderstood what you meant
Anyways here goes

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:20 pm
by Squirt
^ wasnt that Sig Pilots sig the guy who got banned?
Or am i thinking of another person

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:41 pm
by Flightmeck
Uhm... As far as i know i haven't been banned and if someone else had that sign he/she stole it from me. I can prove it with both stocks and images saved during development. If anyone doubts my honesty that is...
But never mind, do you have any comment of the new pic?

Edit: btw, what was the name of the banned person? Maybe i can find a post by him/her to see if he/she used my sig.
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:44 pm
by Squirt
Never mind its that both of you wanted to be pilots i confused ya mate >_>
And you covered the guys face!
8/10 since your just beggining on photoshop, But you never cover the renders face.
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:58 pm
by Verfo
i like it, i cant see the text though, and can u make another version all B&W to see if its better or not, but its very good idea 8.5/10
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:21 pm
by Flightmeck
Squirt wrote:Never mind its that both of you wanted to be pilots i confused ya mate >_>
And you covered the guys face!
8/10 since your just beggining on photoshop, But you never cover the renders face.
I hate to sound like a smart a$$ but i don't think i covered his face, since he turns his head down... I think it's on his forehead... But yeah i definitely get your point

Thanks for the rating =)
Btw im using gimp not photoshop
Verfo wrote:i like it, i cant see the text though, and can u make another version all B&W to see if its better or not, but its very good idea 8.5/10
Thanks for the rating, I've made a black and white one but i'm not sure i made it the way you had in mind. I added it in the first post.

About the text, i was afraid it would ruin the whole pic so that's the reason i made it so small

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:35 pm
by RogueKiller
I think it might be better without the flower. Just a scenery sig with depth.
Also the B/W looks better.
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:48 pm
by Flightmeck
RogueKiller wrote:I think it might be better without the flower. Just a scenery sig with depth.
Also the B/W looks better.
Uhm... Ok... ^_^ But if i remove the flower i think i miss the whole feeling of it, besides then it will only bee the background and the two men + sparkles and some light/color mixing = almost back at the stock background. But i'll make one a little later... *goes playing etqw*
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:54 pm
by Verfo
with B&W looks alot better now
@rogue: if he takes out the flower, then u take out the meaning
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 9:43 pm
by Flightmeck
Verfo wrote:with B&W looks alot better now
Ok ^_^
@RogueKiller I've made the one without the flower now... It looks "ok" imo but not more then that. =)
Edit: Ok i couldn't resist, i think those signs without any background are so smexy so i tried to make one myself. Added it in the 1st post. ^
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 9:48 pm
by RogueKiller
I like the one without the flower. Its simple and neat.
Just remove the sparkles and make the two old men the focal.
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:13 pm
by Flightmeck
Yepp might try that one, but not tonight ^_^
What do you think of the one without a background?
I think it looks cool but the sparkles might be a little too bright to workout with this forums background. But i don't know...
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:17 pm
by cin
1st one might work if the bg had a little bit of color still in it
and was more blurred, so you'd get the effect of that particular
lense (idk what lense that is yeah im that much pro -.-), with the
thing in front being sharp, but the background being blur.
might be worth a try?
Re: Asia inspired, feedback?
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:53 pm
by Flightmeck
Absolutely!

I'm working on a mod of the one without bg but i'll try your idéa right after that.
Edit: Added the second version of the one without bg.
@ Cin, i tried what you said, or at least what i thought you meant... haha, so was that what you meant?

otherwise please explain
