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Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 5:49 pm
by Flightmeck
Hi
I'm looking for a little feedback on my latest creation. It's a simple one but i kinda like it... Don't know what it is with the japanese cherry but i just love it. The two men sitting is actually a little statue we have at home and i like that too. ^_^

So what do you think? (And please no "That's nothing special with it i can make one just like that in 5 min." comments please).

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I see that it might bee a little big to use as a sig. but whatever ^_^. If I make it smaller it'll be hard to see what's in it (I think).

@ Verfo

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I personally don't think it's as good in B&W but that's just me... ^_^

Edit:

@RogueKiller

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There ya go! Deleted the flower and tried to add more depth. In my opinion it looks kina cool too but then it's a "new" pic.

Edit:
So i made one without any background too:
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Edit again:

@ Cin
Was this what you meant? If not please explain a little more in detail ^^ My english might not bee that good so i might have misunderstood what you meant :roll:
Anyways here goes
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Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:20 pm
by Squirt
^ wasnt that Sig Pilots sig the guy who got banned?

Or am i thinking of another person :?

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:41 pm
by Flightmeck
Uhm... As far as i know i haven't been banned and if someone else had that sign he/she stole it from me. I can prove it with both stocks and images saved during development. If anyone doubts my honesty that is...
But never mind, do you have any comment of the new pic? :)

Edit: btw, what was the name of the banned person? Maybe i can find a post by him/her to see if he/she used my sig.

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:44 pm
by Squirt
Never mind its that both of you wanted to be pilots i confused ya mate >_>

And you covered the guys face!

8/10 since your just beggining on photoshop, But you never cover the renders face.

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:58 pm
by Verfo
i like it, i cant see the text though, and can u make another version all B&W to see if its better or not, but its very good idea 8.5/10

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:21 pm
by Flightmeck
Squirt wrote:Never mind its that both of you wanted to be pilots i confused ya mate >_>

And you covered the guys face!

8/10 since your just beggining on photoshop, But you never cover the renders face.


I hate to sound like a smart a$$ but i don't think i covered his face, since he turns his head down... I think it's on his forehead... But yeah i definitely get your point :) Thanks for the rating =)
Btw im using gimp not photoshop :wink:

Verfo wrote:i like it, i cant see the text though, and can u make another version all B&W to see if its better or not, but its very good idea 8.5/10


Thanks for the rating, I've made a black and white one but i'm not sure i made it the way you had in mind. I added it in the first post. :) About the text, i was afraid it would ruin the whole pic so that's the reason i made it so small ;)

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:35 pm
by RogueKiller
I think it might be better without the flower. Just a scenery sig with depth.
Also the B/W looks better.

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:48 pm
by Flightmeck
RogueKiller wrote:I think it might be better without the flower. Just a scenery sig with depth.
Also the B/W looks better.


Uhm... Ok... ^_^ But if i remove the flower i think i miss the whole feeling of it, besides then it will only bee the background and the two men + sparkles and some light/color mixing = almost back at the stock background. But i'll make one a little later... *goes playing etqw*

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:54 pm
by Verfo
with B&W looks alot better now
@rogue: if he takes out the flower, then u take out the meaning

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 9:43 pm
by Flightmeck
Verfo wrote:with B&W looks alot better now

Ok ^_^

@RogueKiller I've made the one without the flower now... It looks "ok" imo but not more then that. =)

Edit: Ok i couldn't resist, i think those signs without any background are so smexy so i tried to make one myself. Added it in the 1st post. ^

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 9:48 pm
by RogueKiller
I like the one without the flower. Its simple and neat.
Just remove the sparkles and make the two old men the focal.

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:13 pm
by Flightmeck
Yepp might try that one, but not tonight ^_^
What do you think of the one without a background?
I think it looks cool but the sparkles might be a little too bright to workout with this forums background. But i don't know...

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:17 pm
by cin
1st one might work if the bg had a little bit of color still in it
and was more blurred, so you'd get the effect of that particular
lense (idk what lense that is yeah im that much pro -.-), with the
thing in front being sharp, but the background being blur.

might be worth a try?

Re: Asia inspired, feedback?

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:53 pm
by Flightmeck
Absolutely! :) I'm working on a mod of the one without bg but i'll try your idéa right after that. :)
Edit: Added the second version of the one without bg.

@ Cin, i tried what you said, or at least what i thought you meant... haha, so was that what you meant? :D otherwise please explain :D