GAR
Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 1:57 am
So did I blow it again?
So did I blow it again?
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So did I blow it again?
Re: GAR
Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 1:03 pm
No, you didnt blow it 
When it comes to any style of art its almost impossible to "blow it". Everyone has their own style and every piece is unique.
Im a big fan of black & white so ill give you + points on that.
There are a few things that could use some work like depth and focal point.
Depth could be achieved by adding a light source to the piece and bluring or making some parts like the wavy thing going behind the girl instead of on top of her.
Focal point and flow are both equally important, you have some flow but it needs work as its all over the place right now.
The focal point is kind off made weaker by the thing in the top left.
Keep up the good work though.
When it comes to any style of art its almost impossible to "blow it". Everyone has their own style and every piece is unique.
Im a big fan of black & white so ill give you + points on that.
There are a few things that could use some work like depth and focal point.
Depth could be achieved by adding a light source to the piece and bluring or making some parts like the wavy thing going behind the girl instead of on top of her.
Focal point and flow are both equally important, you have some flow but it needs work as its all over the place right now.
The focal point is kind off made weaker by the thing in the top left.
Keep up the good work though.
Re: GAR
Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 5:45 pm
Yay!
Yah, I actually screwed up in making the wavy thing and made it inseparable from the girl, so I couldn't change that.
And about the thing in the top left, I guess I kinda just felt like using a render, whether it turned out well or not.
Yah, I actually screwed up in making the wavy thing and made it inseparable from the girl, so I couldn't change that.
And about the thing in the top left, I guess I kinda just felt like using a render, whether it turned out well or not.
Re: GAR
Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 6:20 pm
0l3n wrote:No, you didnt blow it
When it comes to any style of art its almost impossible to "blow it". Everyone has their own style and every piece is unique.
Im a big fan of black & white so ill give you + points on that.
There are a few things that could use some work like depth and focal point.
Depth could be achieved by adding a light source to the piece and bluring or making some parts like the wavy thing going behind the girl instead of on top of her.
Focal point and flow are both equally important, you have some flow but it needs work as its all over the place right now.
The focal point is kind off made weaker by the thing in the top left.
Keep up the good work though.
i normally like to leave my own comments on how i feel, but this summs it up
^^Re: GAR
Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:00 pm
aazumak wrote:i normally like to leave my own comments on how i feel, but this summs it up
Thanks. To be honest though, I'm using the same boring techniques I always do. I really should get some Tuts done, but I always get lost at some point and left like "What?" and stuff...
Oh well.
Re: GAR
Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 1:15 am
omg this ones awesome o.O Only thing is I'd make the focal point stick out the most.