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NSR~ Gotrunks
Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 1:19 am
by nohunta
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Re: NSR~ Gotrunks
Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 3:20 am
by Nantosh
Mhmmm.... no.
If it's your first sig, nt ^ ^
Re: NSR~ Gotrunks
Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 12:06 pm
by Rizla
you should put multiple goals on one line so each post you make doesnt send the page down.
Re: NSR~ Gotrunks
Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 2:33 pm
by Nantosh
Rizla wrote:you should put multiple goals on one line so each post you make doesnt send the page down.
Lulz, nice CnC ^ ^
In my opinion, rewrite the background to something good then fix Gotrunks so he doesn't look like you used the lasso tool (or whatever the hell it's called) to cut the him out...
Re: NSR~ Gotrunks
Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 4:23 pm
by Swindler
imo its bad.. sorry but it is..
dont need to explain anything, you see it yourself.. i dont try to be mean just says what i think..
Re: NSR~ Gotrunks
Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 2:32 am
by BrokenSaint
HejsaN wrote:imo its bad.. sorry but it is..
dont need to explain anything, you see it yourself.. i dont try to be mean just says what i think..
Um, tips then?
If it's your first then at least you have a good start. Some things you could work first is coloring and lighting. Some good ways to improve coloring is learning the color wheel. Gives you a good look on what colors go well with each other. As for the lighting, trunks is too bright and we don't know where the light is coming from.
Good try though. You should also look at some tutorials on basics, especially Rizla's tut:
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Re: NSR~ Gotrunks
Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 5:46 am
by nohunta
V2 added
Re: NSR~ Gotrunks
Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 9:17 am
by Swindler
i say as Nantosh... it looks like a bad cut out of the render.