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made my first large piece~

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 5:20 pm
by _Angels
well heres my first attempt on my first large piece =/

Image
comments and critix appreciated

made a new one:)

http://angels2.deviantart.com/art/peace ... n-85457003

Re: made my first large piece~

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 6:19 pm
by dom
Rework typography and remove lens flare.

Re: made my first large piece~

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 7:17 pm
by TOloseGT
it's very good

is that hand supposed to be there? were u going for a "just drawn" kinda feeling?

Re: made my first large piece~

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 7:19 pm
by aazumak
shes drawn very well

but i agree with the lens flare, its kinda nice because it adds more depth, but overall i don't like it for the piece

Re: made my first large piece~

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 1:18 am
by BrokenSaint
I don't see it.

Re: made my first large piece~

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 12:52 pm
by _Angels
any1 got deviant?:o i wants new friendz on DA xD

http://angels2.deviantart.com/


edit made a new one :)) on top