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NSR unknown girl

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:25 pm
by hemagoku
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Re: NSR unknown girl

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:29 pm
by Deviant
Don't really know what to say yet, other then that it doesn't look good to me (she's missing her lower body :shock:)

Re: NSR unknown girl

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:59 pm
by hemagoku
Deviant wrote:Don't really know what to say yet, other then that it doesn't look good to me (she's missing her lower body :shock:)

ya i know ,i like the render ,but it had no lower body :(

Re: NSR unknown girl

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 3:59 pm
by Swindler
i say as Hersey the smudging ruins a little..

And that 2 glow lines destroys the flow..

Re: NSR unknown girl

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 4:23 pm
by Deviant
hemagoku wrote:
Deviant wrote:Don't really know what to say yet, other then that it doesn't look good to me (she's missing her lower body :shock:)

ya i know ,i like the render ,but it had no lower body :(


I'm by no means pro or anything, but try using a clipping mask/a scatter smudge, that might look better then a plain smudge

Re: NSR unknown girl

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:52 pm
by Nantosh
Hershey wrote:that gigantic smudge on the bottom of her messes it up


Yah... sorry... completely destroys it. Oh, and I think thats from Clannad, though I've never watched it, but the style looks similar.