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NSR unknown girl
Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:25 pm
by hemagoku
Re: NSR unknown girl
Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:29 pm
by Deviant
Don't really know what to say yet, other then that it doesn't look good to me (she's missing her lower body

)
Re: NSR unknown girl
Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:59 pm
by hemagoku
Deviant wrote:Don't really know what to say yet, other then that it doesn't look good to me (she's missing her lower body

)
ya i know ,i like the render ,but it had no lower body

Re: NSR unknown girl
Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 3:59 pm
by Swindler
i say as Hersey the smudging ruins a little..
And that 2 glow lines destroys the flow..
Re: NSR unknown girl
Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 4:23 pm
by Deviant
hemagoku wrote:Deviant wrote:Don't really know what to say yet, other then that it doesn't look good to me (she's missing her lower body

)
ya i know ,i like the render ,but it had no lower body

I'm by no means pro or anything, but try using a clipping mask/a scatter smudge, that might look better then a plain smudge
Re: NSR unknown girl
Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:52 pm
by Nantosh
Hershey wrote:that gigantic smudge on the bottom of her messes it up
Yah... sorry... completely destroys it. Oh, and I think thats from Clannad, though I've never watched it, but the style looks similar.