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Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 9:04 pm
by N1TROX
Collab with holla.


v1 : Image

v2 : Image


c&c is greatly appreciated.

Re: Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 9:06 pm
by Snudge
Oversharpened or LQ, can't see properly. Depth is great, and lighting is off. Nice effects, and nice background(even though I know it's just a stock :P )
7.5/10 You guys can do better. :P

Re: Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 9:10 pm
by HOLLAstir
Background isn't just a stock. Although just curious, how is the lighting off?

Re: Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 9:28 pm
by N1TROX
Yea, the background isnt a stock, id share the psd but this forum is extremely ungrateful when something free is given.

Re: Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 9:39 pm
by BrokenSaint
well if you look, there is light appearing on the left side of her yet the light source is coming from the right behind her and that's where the shadow shows so it looks like it's unblended a tad. could also use more depth. Color choice and setting is good that's for sure :D

That's about it for now, I just woke up. bleh =_-

EDIT:

Yea, the background isnt a stock, id share the psd but this forum is extremely ungrateful when something free is given.


Please explain.

Re: Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 9:39 pm
by Snudge
The lighting on her face is to the left, and on the stock, it seems to be somewhere to her(OUR >.<) right.

Re: Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 9:48 pm
by HOLLAstir
I must be blind, I see no lightsource on the right, nor was one created there. I guess the source needs to be more clear.

Re: Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 12:52 pm
by N1TROX
viewtopic.php?f=11&t=81246


3 replies, beautiful.

Re: Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 1:32 pm
by Waisha
damn, you guys are defensive.

as for the sig, I like it but I think the c4ds(or whatever they are) need some smudging since they steal attention from the stock.