Torn : nitrx and holla collab.

[N1TROX]

Collab with holla.


v1 :

v2 :


c&c is greatly appreciated.

[Snudge]

Oversharpened or LQ, can't see properly. Depth is great, and lighting is off. Nice effects, and nice background(even though I know it's just a stock )
7.5/10 You guys can do better.

[HOLLAstir]

Background isn't just a stock. Although just curious, how is the lighting off?

[N1TROX]

Yea, the background isnt a stock, id share the psd but this forum is extremely ungrateful when something free is given.

[BrokenSaint]

well if you look, there is light appearing on the left side of her yet the light source is coming from the right behind her and that's where the shadow shows so it looks like it's unblended a tad. could also use more depth. Color choice and setting is good that's for sure

That's about it for now, I just woke up. bleh =_-

EDIT:

Yea, the background isnt a stock, id share the psd but this forum is extremely ungrateful when something free is given.

Please explain.

[Snudge]

The lighting on her face is to the left, and on the stock, it seems to be somewhere to her(OUR >.<) right.

[HOLLAstir]

I must be blind, I see no lightsource on the right, nor was one created there. I guess the source needs to be more clear.

[N1TROX]

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3 replies, beautiful.

[Waisha]

damn, you guys are defensive.

as for the sig, I like it but I think the c4ds(or whatever they are) need some smudging since they steal attention from the stock.