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First sig, first post!

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:35 pm
by Deviant
Could you rate and give critique to my signature? Any help is greatly appreciated..

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:40 pm
by HOLLAstir
Welcome to the AC. Hope you stick around. First sig? not bad. You have a flow, but still needs work. Also work on creating depth in your piece. Try to keep your text closer to the focal (generally your render/stock) When it's away from your main center of focus it creates multiple focals which isn't a good thing. I suggest looking up tutorials, follow them and keep practicing. If you need any help or have any questions feel free to PM me.

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:58 pm
by 0l3n
Wheres Crim when you need him, he used to inform all the newcommers :banghead:

@ the sig, it looks a bit empty to me and the text needs work.

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:59 pm
by !G4!
is mine ok ? :? :(

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:08 pm
by YangKang
Im sorry guys but whats wrong with you lol? Its his FIRST sig and it you can compare it to many of the good sigs here in SRF. He can even do these glowlines which I still cant do lol and invested already about 100 hours or more in photoshop :( I really like it for your first sig :D Just as said fix the text and the right side.

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:10 pm
by Deviant
Thank you miss yangkang,

But how/what should i fix in the text?

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:44 pm
by YangKang
Well im actually male but meh :p
Try different things like bringin it closer to the sprite or making the text flow in the same direction as your sig? Also you should try some different fonts :)

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 12:01 am
by Deviant
Ok I took in your advice and worked on the signature a little, so here's the result:

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Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 12:09 am
by !G4!
Awww WiCkED man looks nice :D

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 3:48 am
by BrokenSaint
hey, this ain't bad for first. A lil too monotone for my taste, so try working with mulitple colors. Also try to make the focal stand out the most, so in this case, Venom, since it's all about him, but at the same time don't count the effects out so the beauty is in the whole piece itself, if you catch my drift.

But really, this is good for a first, just read up and learn from tuts, relax and make art. :)

Welcome to the Ac btw. >:B

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 5:39 am
by little_panther
better than my first one lol which is still their lol
yeah but u did a really good job for ur first go
good work

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 11:11 am
by YangKang
Well the position of the font is WAY better but I would try another font ? This one looks really weird :/

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 11:30 am
by Deviant
YangKang wrote:Well the position of the font is WAY better but I would try another font ? This one looks really weird :/


I duplicated the font, motion blurred it and erased a little, that's why it looks weird :P Don't know all options yet, so I like to play around

Re: First sig, first post!

Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 11:48 am
by Swindler
Welcome to AC :) really good sig for the first! Just use a different font