Page 1 of 1

Nsr~Assassin

Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:49 am
by MasterKojito
New sig:
V1:Image
Rate it and comment ploX!
Update!
V2:Image

Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:58 am
by HOLLAstir
Flow is off. Work on depth. Blur/sharpen the bg to get your focal to stand out more then the bg. Scratch the border, move the text closer to his face. Not a bad piece, just needs work.

Re: Nsr~Assassin

Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:00 am
by MasterKojito
Added V2. Better or worse?

Re: Nsr~Assassin

Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:24 am
by cin
looks as if you have low opacity on your focal *_*

focal should pop out more, that would make it look much better

Re: Nsr~Assassin

Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:21 pm
by BrokenSaint
make the text a bit bigger and fox the blurry edges of the focal. Good job so far, just fix those details. :D