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NSR ~ Sing for the Moment
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:16 pm
by Swindler
Dont like it.. w/e
C'n'C
Re: NSR ~ Sing for the Moment
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:03 pm
by Hostage
Hmmm, it's nice but , and you probably already know this, the text can use a little tweaking. My advice; either get rid of "poetry" or make" sing for the moment a smaller font. Also move it to the left side closer to his hand your right side seems bit heavy. This way it will balance it out. I really like the background but something about the colours looks odd to me. All in all awesome job. ^^
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:37 pm
by HOLLAstir
Flow and depth need a lot of work, Scratch the text. I like the concept, just clean it up.