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Like it, but not the cut-out look of his head.

Still good though ^ ^

Nantosh wrote:Like it, but not the cut-out look of his head.

Still good though ^ ^

Yeah, I realized that after I finished it. There's so many layers though I'm confused where to start erasing xD

Hershey wrote:it seems like there is a white outline of the render...

seems like your recent pieces sorta look alike :3

Anyway to help me improve? :\ You like it? Good parts? Bad Parts? I'd like a serious critique please.

EDIT: Outline-ish look fixed

It looks smexy but like those two said the head does pop out a little. Try duplicating the render and smudging it a bit then setting it on soft light( place it under the original) and blur the original just a but around the edge. Also tone down the c4ds personally I think they are dominating the piece a tad much. Other wise I'm loving the colours and good job with the Topaz this time around looks ace.

Thanks. I think I'll keep the c4d's. I intended to have the focus on mostly the effects since It's what brings out the color in the sig anyway. It'd look empty if I tone it down some IMO. By the way, there's no topaz here. I'll try the dupeing + smudge though.

BrokenSaint wrote:Thanks. I think I'll keep the c4d's. It'd look empty if I tone it down some IMO. By the way, there's no topaz here. I'll try the dupeing + smudge though.

That explains it. I was wondering why it wasn't as "smooth" looking as the rest of the pieces you've been making lately. xD

i think the background is simply amazing, its a great sig with good composition, the ext on the bottom is cool, but not my favorite way of doing it for a smaller sig