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My first LP. CnC. If you want you can give me some tips to improve in LP's.

looks great imo.

could you post stock as well?
just for curiosity :]

Here's the stock.

MM, needs more depth IMO. Text needs some fixin' too. Looks flat and the clipping masks look random. LP's take more time and require much more concentration into detail rather than smudge here brush there and voila. Good colors though. kiu

Overall:

- The colors are great. =) Love the shades of pink, red and tints of baby yellow.
- A bit small for a "LP"

You need to improve a bit on the depth and carefully think about the composition of the LP. The effects, the lights, the depth and the flow should be detailed but not too messy. This will make a great sig though, not a great LP. I totally agree with BS that your clipping masks are a bit random. I like what you have on the right side but the clipping mask to the left of her head and the big blob of red to the right of her head is really unappealing.

The topaz is killing your depth try erasing areas from the background and just leave it on "Alba" herself. See if that helps.


Love the composition although I agree with the splatter over the shoulder is a bit random. Anyway it's a sexy piece. * pulls down pants*

i like the splatter on the bottom, i would only say that it needs some more depth, and i dont like the text to much, the colors seem to vary to much and it looks kinda off


but the background is nice, and i like the bottom bit of splatter

You can never go wrong with jessica alba.

no offense but i think it needs to be bigger to be considered an lp

well it defintely can't be used as a sig

Very nice.