Shooting Star

[Snudge]

2 versions.
Mostly opacity/stock work on this one. And LOTS of adjustment layers.
C'nC?

[Snudge]

Textless versions added.
But srsly, 18 views no replys? T.T

[HOLLAstir]

Like reks, there's no going around this one either, I don't like it and i'll tell you why. The BG and the flow of the piece doesn't go with the stock at all. The flow you tried to establish looks really forced, the lines going around the stock at the bottom going off to the right just doesn't look good. I like the text, for the sole purpose you branched out away from the tiny text and the "08" space fillers. Stars can look good in a tag, although you got carried away with them, way too many. There is a black line going through the middle of the piece, what is it? It kills the flow you were going for. There isn't enough depth to the piece. I'll be blunt, It looks really half assed. A piece like this is below your skill level, you can do better snudge.

[aazumak]

i think its a cool and unique sig, i like the stock, but the the background seem really simple and uniform, the small white lines are good, but the rest of the background is all the same, and i agree with hostage, but i like it more than he does

and text is better than non text, it helps bring it together

[HOLLAstir]

i think its a cool and unique sig, i like the stock, but the the background seem really simple and uniform, the small white lines are good, but the rest of the background is all the same, and i agree with hostage, but i like it more than he does

and text is better than non text, it helps bring it together

Wrong.

[aazumak]

im really sorry, i had like 10 threads open and i had just read hostages quote earlier, im sorry man , i didnt mean to get you two confused, it was just the fact that both begin with H

[Faiien]

is that a motorcycle with a galaxy bg?
well, w/e the case, dont really like the blurred starry bg

[_Angels]

lolz faiien.. who r u and what did u do exept going trough others ppl work and saying its all bad o_o in every topic i only seee u compaining o_O not even a compliment=/
so im wondering did you ever made something?
maby u can give some critics that ppl can improve instead of saying what you dont like=p

this one i think is quite nice.
like it eventho its b/w

[HOLLAstir]

lolz faiien.. who r u and what did u do exept going trough others ppl work and saying its all bad o_o in every topic i only seee u compaining o_O not even a compliment=/
so im wondering did you ever made something?

He is on my gfx team. It may seem weird to see those comments here, but go to GR or PR and thats usually what you get.