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wry smile

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:22 pm
by aazumak
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did this one with my smudge brush :)

Re: wry smile

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 2:54 am
by aazumak
30 views and not one comment? i dont care if all you have to say is that my sig suks,

i would rather know you hate it than to get nothing,


cmon , tear it apart :/
make me a new one, lol

Re: wry smile

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:01 am
by HOLLAstir
Sorry, thought I already commented. Anyways, I like the flow from the fingers, though thats about it. It needs more contrast and depth. I don't like the dual text effect. It makes multiple focals and it's never a good thing. The hand on the right was creative, but take out the text.

Re: wry smile

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:07 am
by aazumak
HOLLAstir wrote:Sorry, thought I already commented. Anyways, I like the flow from the fingers, though thats about it. It needs more contrast and depth. I don't like the dual text effect. It makes multiple focals and it's never a good thing. The hand on the right was creative, but take out the text.


yea your always right about those focal points :), ill do it later, atm i cant re-open PS, thanks holla

Re: wry smile

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:09 am
by Faiien
the girl/woman isnt very appealing to me, she looks old.
i also think you should get rid of the text on the right side

Re: wry smile

Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 9:00 am
by HavinFunSince89
the text on both sides distract me. Try fixing that.

Re: wry smile

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:46 am
by LM
OMG is it a man or a woman! :D All I can say it's completely different from all the bright colors i know you for.

Re: wry smile

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 12:28 pm
by 0l3n
The thing that bothers me is the right arm, it looks like she has 2 right hands. Text could be removed on the right side to and the effects on her hand makes it look old.