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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:22 pm
by aazumak
well, new style today! i myself love it, i made it with screenshots i took from winamp while I was watching my music lol
id love some comments, and id really like to know how to improve for the next one
no gradient layers btw

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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:24 pm
by Swindler
I like it, awesome flow. But something that doesnt really catch my eyes is that light on his shoulders. but great to see another style from you

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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 9:35 pm
by HOLLAstir
Sorry, i'm going to be blunt, don't like it too much. Get rid of those brackets around the text, it's not helping. It looks odd to me when the BG is colorful, then your stock/render is b&w. The BG is tooooooo bright, it needs more contrast and more depth. Above his shoulder there's a bright white space, it seems out of place. What you did do really well, was the flow. Flow was dead on, although you need to work on the depth and contrast of the piece.
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 9:48 pm
by aazumak
yea i guess the stock does look b and white lol
http://www.sxc.hu/photo/956499i didnt even think about it
thanks man, i need comments like that
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 9:49 pm
by aazumak
sorry to bump, but could i get a few more posts?