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NSR ~ When Is Summer?
Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:12 pm
by mmellu
Re: NSR ~ When Is Summer?
Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:21 pm
by aazumak
the only thin gi would tell you to do is, rasterize your text layer(right click on it, then rasterize) then sharpen it, other than that its nice and simple
Re: NSR ~ When Is Summer?
Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:22 pm
by Swindler
i really hate pop outs! i dont like cartoon sigs. the girl isnt blended. Keep the texts near each other. text on 2 different places makes your eyes look everywhere.
Sorry but i have seen better from you 3/10
Re: NSR ~ When Is Summer?
Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:28 pm
by mmellu
i'll try do something.
Re: NSR ~ When Is Summer?
Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:55 pm
by _UnKnOwN
Too much burn on the girl. you need to find a point thats more burn than the origional and less that the current and then it will be about right.
+1 on the rasterize and sharpening with the text

Re: NSR ~ When Is Summer?
Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 9:06 pm
by aazumak
i agree, i like the light one much better, but the new 1 has better text
i would maybe make the original just a little bit darker, but like the new 1 is like 4 times as dark as it should be, it needs just a little bit of darkness