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Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 5:48 pm
by Millenium
<3 I'm done now! Check it out on DA <3
http://misaki-c27.deviantart.com/art/No ... g-79134059

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Re: Work in Progress - Technology LP

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 6:21 pm
by YangKang
Oh my gawd. pure seckiness! only thing is I would fill the empty black space on the left with some text then its perfect imo! very nice job 9,9/10

Re: Work in Progress - Technology LP

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 7:06 pm
by Millenium
Thanks YK <3 I'm not sure if I should add more effects around the big circle like more layers of C4D in different colors because its a bit monotone now.

Re: Work in Progress - Technology LP

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:54 pm
by Snudge
Add at least one more colour, and try to not overfill the blank space.
You also might want to consider looking up some advert posters @ DA for inspiration :)

Re: Work in Progress - Technology LP

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 9:39 pm
by _Angels
i like it :) not everything has to be fill at every pixel and difficult to be pretty :D

Re: Work in Progress - Technology LP

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 10:15 pm
by Snudge
_Angels wrote:i like it :) not everything has to be fill at every pixel and difficult to be pretty :D


+1! :)

Re: Work in Progress - Technology LP

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 10:40 pm
by Untitled_
thats sex on a leash :love:

Re: Work in Progress - Technology LP

Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 11:19 pm
by fena
That's just amazing, Milly. One of the things that I like the most is the glow line you threw in. I see alot of tags (like the ones that I used to make) that had just random glow lines thrown in - sometimes it looks okay; sometimes it doesn't. But this looks fantastic.
As well as all your other effects! It looks like such a professional poster. Y'know, like the ones you see when you walk into the Cingular store? Yah!

Apple apple! <3

Re: Work in Progress - Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 1:54 pm
by Waisha
Lovely. I like it the way it is.

Re: Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 9:49 pm
by christina
Everyones better than me =(
I just havent had the time latley...
oh great job=) i love it

Re: Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 11:01 pm
by fena
!!!
Email that to Nokia!

Re: Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 11:13 pm
by Dystopia
fena wrote:!!!
Email that to Nokia!


lol yeah, theyd probably buy it off you!, or give you a free phone :P

Re: Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 11:16 pm
by HOLLAstir
Dystopia wrote:
fena wrote:!!!
Email that to Nokia!


lol yeah, theyd probably buy it off you!, or give you a free phone :P

They would probably give you some stupid free ringtone.

Re: Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 11:17 pm
by Dystopia
HOLLAstir wrote:
Dystopia wrote:
fena wrote:!!!
Email that to Nokia!


lol yeah, theyd probably buy it off you!, or give you a free phone :P

They would probably give you some stupid free ringtone.


lol or that :P

Re: Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 4:45 am
by Untitled_
fena wrote:!!!
Email that to Nokia!

if you don't i will :twisted:

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:00 am
by rek
Thats nice, but i dont know what to say bout it :/ i'll just rate it 8/10

Re: Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 11:01 am
by Hostage
Ewwwwwwww, Milly, it looks poopy! :P

Boooo apple.



No I kid, it looks smexy mill mister. I love the pentool text combination there makes it look really "techy" if that's even a word. =P

Re: Technology LP (Done! <3)

Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:13 pm
by Quyxz
Yeah this looks great. Nice combination of the purple with the dark.

But if I have to give you some critic, I would start about the 2 lightsources. I am not sure if that works well. Maybe try just one lightsource on your next piece ?