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NSR Stargate Sig (Numero Uno)

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 4:22 am
by Deadsolid
Well this is the first sig I've made in a looong while and is the first I'm posting here. What ya think?
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PS. What does NSR mean? Should I put it in the subject title?

Re: Stargate Sig (Numero Uno)

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 12:20 pm
by Swindler
its pretty nice but the text doesnt fit and keep it away from the corners :P okey im really bad at texts to but anyway^^

and NSR=New Sig Rate

Re: Stargate Sig (Numero Uno)

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 12:36 pm
by Deadsolid
Ok I got a good Idea. Thanks.

Edit: Re did the text.
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Re: Stargate Sig (Numero Uno)

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 1:00 pm
by cin
agreed on what hejsan said. better you put the text somewhere on the left
of the focal (like above left) and make it blend in. you could try putting
the text layer on "soft light" and duplicating that 2 times.

for the rest, i miss something of a light source. i see the front of the
spaceship thing is lighter than the rear, but you might want to accentuate
that. if you fix the lighting and bring more light/dark contrast into the
piece, you will also gain some depth.

edit: i really liked it tho, and i tried out a couple of things with it.
this is what i came up with:
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i also uploaded the .psd
http://www.sendspace.com/file/fxh88c

just a couple of little things i did to it, you can check out the .psd and
perhaps find out some new things ;] not saying my version is the optimal
version, but i tried to add some depth and some lighting :]