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Fire DAnce

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:22 pm
by aazumak
uhh... yeah.. i kinda like it, its for SOTW, i hope to win one of them soon >.<

thats the render i used
http://www.sxc.hu/browse.phtml?f=download&id=645095

Image

Re: Fire DAnce

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:14 pm
by Panu
like i said on your copcat sig, i love the colors. it can complete flow as seen from me. and i love your text like always. this is some fantastic work bro.

9/10

Re: Fire DAnce

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:17 am
by HOLLAstir
Requested Critique :P
Anyways, your color schemes are always a chin scratcher for me. I either adore it, or I don't. I do like the colors, although there is not a lot of contrast between them which makes the tag rub off a "monotone" feel. I'd try a different border, right now they are uneven and it doesn't quite fit. It seems a little LQ and grainy. If I didn't know the theme was dance I wouldn't have known what I was staring at. Your text has always been unique and appealing. I'd like to see more contrast, a little more depth, some more flow around the stock and a different border. Colors are nice, and text is good as well. Smudging is good, i'd just like to see more flow with it.

Re: Fire DAnce

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 4:47 am
by aazumak
HOLLAstir wrote:Requested Critique :P
Anyways, your color schemes are always a chin scratcher for me. I either adore it, or I don't. I do like the colors, although there is not a lot of contrast between them which makes the tag rub off a "monotone" feel. I'd try a different border, right now they are uneven and it doesn't quite fit. It seems a little LQ and grainy. If I didn't know the theme was dance I wouldn't have known what I was staring at. Your text has always been unique and appealing. I'd like to see more contrast, a little more depth, some more flow around the stock and a different border. Colors are nice, and text is good as well. Smudging is good, i'd just like to see more flow with it.



thnks :) yea, it did get grainy, and there was a bunch of images called dancing with fire, people were just doing dances with flaming sticks, its hard to see, but thats whats going on lol