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NSR~Enlighten

Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 2:32 pm
by Hostage
Yeah, I haven't made a sig in a few days and though would give it a go out of boredom. I gotta thank Fug_Dup though for the idea with the text coming out of the book which I got from his "illuminate" piece.

Image

not much but meh what can you do =P.

Re: NSR~Enlighten

Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 5:11 pm
by cin
i like all except for the left part of the line you have running through it.
perhaps you should try make that line kindof stroke her chin more.. if u know
what i mean ;] just a bit weird now how it turns when it hits her hair.

for the rest, love the lighting, love the scene, love the txt.

9/10

Re: NSR~Enlighten

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 3:05 am
by Hostage
Ohh very true, now that I look at it it looks weird. The look was trying to go for was that the letters for curving towards the inside of the sig from that points so that it had gotten further way, which is also why I blurred it from that point on, but I will change it. Thanks cin ^^.

Re: NSR~Enlighten

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:14 pm
by Hostage
No love for poor old Hostage. Fine I only love cin from now on........*goes to cry in corner* :(

Re: NSR~Enlighten

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:19 pm
by BrokenSaint
Hm, you know, you should try doing some large pieces. I think you would do so much better with LP's rather than sigs because LP's allow space for lots of detail. I bet that sig would look awesome as an LP. If you want, I can give you samples of the winning large pieces back when we did the AC teams.

Anyways, awesome. Lighting done quite nicely. Liking the composition. 8.5/10 But still, that would do great as an LP. :D

Re: NSR~Enlighten

Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 2:37 pm
by Hostage
You think so? hmmm, well I'll give it a go with either this stock using the same concept or something else. Never hurts to try. ^^

EDIT: and yeah for sure pm me some of then. It would be greatly appreciated =).