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NSR~ I can see you

Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:26 pm
by Doron
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Rate it please!!!

Re: NSR~ I can see you

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:16 pm
by Sharpy
meh its ok kind of hard to read the text on the "can" part

Re: NSR~ I can see you

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:08 pm
by iNunoPT
dont like the border at all... :(
maybe make them more thin and another color also
not sure how to say this but, less contrast?

besides that i think it is quite good :wink:

Re: NSR~ I can see you

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 10:02 pm
by 0l3n
Im sorry to say that I have nothing good to say about this one.

Depth: There is none.

Lighting: Again, none.

Text: Bad, you even put some of the text on the oposite side of the render (riz would not like the edge text :P ).

Focalpoint: As it is now you have 3 different focal points, one being the render itself and the other 2 the text.

Border: To thick and eye catching, you want people to look at the contents of a painting not its frame.

Flow: Id say this is the best part of the sig but you could work on it some more to make it go less in a straigt line, it makes the flow look forced.

Please dont take this the wrong way, I know you can do way better then this. We all have our up's and down's.