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[*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:30 am
by Faiien
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experimented alot with colors on this sig
this was gonna be my submission into sig wars...but as you can see it has nothing to do with music XD
c&c, thx

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:50 am
by HOLLAstir
Could use more contrast, seems to lack it. I do like the effects and the flow is good. It's a little too bright, i'd tone it down. The focal seems blurry, sharpen it, or unless the stock is LQ. Text should be closer to the focal. Take out the ~ next to Forgotten, doesn't really help it. Work on the subtext underneath "Forgotten" it just doesn't seem to fit where it's placed, might want to re-arrange how that's set up. It's a good piece though, one of your better ones as opposed to your past pieces.

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:19 am
by Faiien
thx for the crit holla
edited based on crit

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:36 am
by HOLLAstir
EDIT: Nvm, looking much better faiien.

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:43 am
by Faiien
thx :)

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 10:39 am
by Doron
I like the dark one, but I have no idea what is written under Forgotten...

Maybe if you could make that one a bit clearer, that would help..

overall,

8.3/10

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 10:44 am
by BrokenSaint
OMG small text lol. Iz cool yo.

Can't a guy find his own style without people copying it?! T_T lol

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 10:48 am
by Doron
BrokenSaint wrote:OMG small text lol. Iz cool yo.

Can't a guy find his own style without people copying it?! T_T lol



^^ I have to think a second about that...¬.¬

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:34 pm
by Faiien
um its a new style of texting called subscript
it just fills up more empty space for the sig, your not really suppose to see what ti says
anymore comments?

Re: [*~*///Forgotten\\\*~*]

Posted: Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:11 pm
by aazumak
yes! i cant wait to write this comment ! it looks GREAT



soooo good, the effect is perfect, and teh simplicity to the rest of the sig is great, just great


Faiien, you are definitively becoming my favorite artist right now, i seriously cant get over this sig, i love how unique it is, and the background color is alo really nice, its dark, but not black,



9.5/10 this is what i consider to be a wonderful sig, write a tut on that effect :P or release the psd