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experimented alot with colors on this sig
this was gonna be my submission into sig wars...but as you can see it has nothing to do with music XD
c&c, thx
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Could use more contrast, seems to lack it. I do like the effects and the flow is good. It's a little too bright, i'd tone it down. The focal seems blurry, sharpen it, or unless the stock is LQ. Text should be closer to the focal. Take out the ~ next to Forgotten, doesn't really help it. Work on the subtext underneath "Forgotten" it just doesn't seem to fit where it's placed, might want to re-arrange how that's set up. It's a good piece though, one of your better ones as opposed to your past pieces.
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thx for the crit holla
edited based on crit

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EDIT: Nvm, looking much better faiien.
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thx :)

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I like the dark one, but I have no idea what is written under Forgotten...

Maybe if you could make that one a bit clearer, that would help..

overall,

8.3/10
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OMG small text lol. Iz cool yo.

Can't a guy find his own style without people copying it?! T_T lol

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BrokenSaint wrote:OMG small text lol. Iz cool yo.

Can't a guy find his own style without people copying it?! T_T lol



^^ I have to think a second about that...¬.¬
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um its a new style of texting called subscript
it just fills up more empty space for the sig, your not really suppose to see what ti says
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yes! i cant wait to write this comment ! it looks GREAT



soooo good, the effect is perfect, and teh simplicity to the rest of the sig is great, just great


Faiien, you are definitively becoming my favorite artist right now, i seriously cant get over this sig, i love how unique it is, and the background color is alo really nice, its dark, but not black,



9.5/10 this is what i consider to be a wonderful sig, write a tut on that effect :P or release the psd
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