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[NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 9:56 pm
by Squirt
Here it is my first sig.
Re: [NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 9:57 pm
by christina
Really nice, kinda looks a little too sharpned, and the text dosent flow too good either.
7.2/10 ^^
Re: [NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 12:06 am
by Swindler
its really good for your first sig =) but says like christina, it looks to sharpened. and try to keep the text away from the corners. try to have it near the render
Re: [NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 3:47 am
by Squirt
Thank you ^.^ any more tips?
Re: [NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 12:00 pm
by 0l3n
Isnt bad for a first try but it just looks way to chaotic.
Re: [NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:51 pm
by Squirt
Umhhh Chaotic mind explaining?
Re: [NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:57 pm
by Millenium
Squirt wrote:Umhhh Chaotic mind explaining?
It means there's too much going on ^^
Sometimes less is more, and more isn't always good.
The thing I didn't understnad is what your main focus was in the sig. Was that an Airplane? >.> I'm sorry if it was something else and its just me who can't tell.
You tried to add a light source, nice try =)
Your text isn't that bad, its simple, not a over-complicated font, great. But try to keep it away from the corners.
Some things you can work on is, try to make a focal. that's where people's eye will go when they first see your sig.
Re: [NSR] My first sig. ( Be gentle)
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 5:38 pm
by Jstar1
the shape of the jet needs to be more defined, looks like its lost in the background