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well here is it.
didnt used c4ds this time alot of brushes o.o and tried smudge >_<
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v2



here is the original one .=/

I like it especially how you did color the mobile phone and her lips :p somethings I would change 1. the fade away effect doesnt look good imo 2. sharpen her a bit she looks blurry and save it as png if you didnt ( imo better quality than jpg ) and last but not least the font. the outerglow doesnt fit

oki lemme try xD

Yes I agree with Yang, nice work on the lips + phone
but the fading into black could be abit smoother
Last is the text, try moving it up or down and lil' bit to the left. Also maby removing the stroke on it

All in all nice work ;D

I think everything is great, the color of the cellphone really matches the lips. The c4ds, I can't even tell you used them, but it really adds to the flow.

The thing is the text, that outer-grow effect looks pretty unprofessional, you could have thought of something better for the text. Remember the KISS rule, its Keep It Simple, Stupid, rule.

Also the transition from the purple coulds to the black background on the left side still look unnatural.

edit:i changed the font and made the fading smoother well tried atleast XD

_Angels wrote:edit:i changed the font and made the fading smoother well tried atleast XD

It's the little things that makes it nice <3 much better imo :]

8.5/10

yay <3 preciated