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Well I was really hesitant to posting this here because I don't really like it. The only reason I didn't delete it is because of how long it took. So I come to you guys for help ?P.S even though you cold probably guess it most of the inspiration for this thread cam from BrokenSaints tutorial and reading some stuff on a gfx site. Lol, I just like BS's stuff, guess that makes me a little fan boy .
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looks like you followed a tut from gamerenders from [.BC.]David
anyways it looks good splash on the right side looks a little blurry and i think you could improve on flow a bit but the composition is good

Well I started off too but as I went further down the tut he didn;t really explain how he did some of his things and I got lost so I remembered BS had a similar tut so I switched over.

EDIT: whoops I just read you comment more closely. It wasn't gamerenders it was a forum fena mentioned once. tech-gfx.com

ahh ic probably the same person under different forums perhaps
well ya anyways, looks good

i just noticed one more thing you could do to make your sig look a little better is make the bars to the right of the focal in descending lengths