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NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 8:25 am
by BrokenSaint
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2nd sig of 2008!

I am so lovin' this one at the moment :love: I took a lot of time into making this sig look as beatiful as it could. >X)

So, C/C?

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 9:45 am
by HOLLAstir
Colors work well. Odd looking render though. Personally I think you over did it with the small white circles at the bottom and the top. I'd rid of quite a few of them. Is the flower part of the render/stock? Kinda sticks out a little too much to me, in a sense creating another focal so it seems odd. The render seems a tad dark, i'd lighten him up a little bit. It's alright, out of 10 i'd give it about a 7 <3 I hope to see more work from you this year.

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:36 am
by LM
As always dude excellent. I don't have anything to point out that is negative cause it's your style. I saw the tutorial for this one and i couldn't pull it off. Kudos dude. Make a tutorial! :D 1000000/1 (exagerated bwahahahahahaha! :twisted: )

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:38 am
by BrokenSaint
Thanks Daniel, was inspired by Rizla to do this one lols. Pretty similar to his "Vibrant" sig if you ask me xD

I actually followed the tut...

:roll:

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:59 am
by Snudge
I KNEW I somehow recognized this ^^

Anyway, I see a sprite but it's a tad too much blended in, if you catch my drift :P TExt is secks as always(/envy), and the overall look is just plain pwn. Also love the flower. 9/10 :3

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 12:56 pm
by Luoma
Damn that looks great, really beautiful =) 95/100

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 1:25 pm
by Faiien
looks great
i think it would have looked better on a white background though but the black does make it pop more

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 1:26 pm
by Snudge
Faiien wrote:looks great
i think it would have looked better on a white background though but the black does make it pop more

The colours wouldnt be as pwetty on white.

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 1:28 pm
by Faiien
i dont know...on the white with a little bit more smudging?
that would be pretty sexy imo

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 1:43 pm
by gamef
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Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 1:46 pm
by Snudge
gamef wrote:...

Spam much?

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:17 pm
by N1TROX
i like it BS.

My only suggestions would be to smudge those white circles at the bottom a little, they pop out a little too much, kills the flow a little bit.

And also, that small little text is kind of annoying, if you need something to fill do some vector squares with a clipping mask (im talking about the text you cant even read-__-}

gj though

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 3:10 pm
by gamef
Snudge wrote:
gamef wrote:...

Spam much?


Eh sorry my cousin wrote something stupid so i had to edit it and i didnt have time to think of a constructive comment.

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 3:13 pm
by 0l3n
Snudge wrote:I KNEW I somehow recognized this ^^


Yeah me to :P

I love the text, backround and depth but the focal issue is bothering me. Try to move the flower closer to the render, that would probably fix it.

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 3:49 pm
by aazumak
love it, text is great, background is magnificent, ur work as gone insane m8, soooooo good, i cant even find anything to critique

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 4:27 pm
by WaX
wow, i love it, looks fantastic, nj =)

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 4:48 pm
by RuYi
It's great! I love the use of color in the sig!
Really nice job. :3

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 5:48 pm
by cin
9/10 i love it, bs.

btw, somehow when i type or read bs im always thinkin bullshit instead of brokensaint

*_*

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 6:32 pm
by Faiien
We all love BS

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 6:59 pm
by AkillerNXC
I really like the color in it, looks great =D

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 9:54 pm
by BrokenSaint
Thanks pplz. :)

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:04 pm
by TwelveEleven
It's like good acting in a porn movie

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:18 pm
by BrokenSaint
TwelveEleven wrote:It's like good acting in a porn movie


lol what? :?

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:19 pm
by TwelveEleven
That means it's really good, and (nearly) impossible

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:25 pm
by deep.in
Thats awesome, look so smooth, all my sigs are sharp, and rude, how do you make it so smooth i dont know :(
Anyway, i love it. There is always space for improvment, so i give it 9.7/10 :D :love:

Re: NSR ~ Ride On A Shooting Star

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:07 am
by BrokenSaint
deep.in wrote:Thats awesome, look so smooth, all my sigs are sharp, and rude, how do you make it so smooth i dont know :(
Anyway, i love it. There is always space for improvment, so i give it 9.7/10 :D :love:


Lol, honestly I don't know exactly. Usually they come out smooth naturally.

I did sharpen just a little bit on the focal and followed it up with lotsa channel mixers, color balance adjustments to bring out the color in those blur parts and such.