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cool haha i like the motion blur. red part on the arm seems kinda off though

Yes the red looks kind of awkward..

yes you need to fan out the red more and make it into a V instead of just a straight line
text could use some work

gonna fix that tommorrow.. im to tired now

I agree. The red on his arm looks like a tribal paint job or something. I like the idea a lot. I've seen a lot of good boxing tags. Text placement is great, i'd move it over a nudge or so to the right. Font kills it, I would go with something a little more simple. Try to smudge out the blur effect to create more of a realistic effect. A little bit more smudging and distortions around the render would have been nice. Did a decent a job though, good job <3