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NSR <> Knocked Out
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Re: NSR <> Knocked Out
cool haha i like the motion blur. red part on the arm seems kinda off though
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Yes the red looks kind of awkward..
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Re: NSR <> Knocked Out
yes you need to fan out the red more and make it into a V instead of just a straight line
text could use some work
text could use some work
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Re: NSR <> Knocked Out
gonna fix that tommorrow.. im to tired now
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Re: NSR <> Knocked Out
I agree. The red on his arm looks like a tribal paint job or something. I like the idea a lot. I've seen a lot of good boxing tags. Text placement is great, i'd move it over a nudge or so to the right. Font kills it, I would go with something a little more simple. Try to smudge out the blur effect to create more of a realistic effect. A little bit more smudging and distortions around the render would have been nice. Did a decent a job though, good job <3
