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New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:51 am
by Faiien
i made this sig today from sig requests
its my first sig moving into my new style
tell me what you guys think
c&c
personally i think its good because it has more depth and volume than my other sigs
but the flow still needs some work and composition is ok but could use some improvement
the border helps in this by adding some dramatic flair to the sig, making it look like a widescreen movie
personal rating for sig
7/10
Image

Re: New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:08 am
by Azn_Pride
i think it's 8/10.for some reason, in my eyes, the bottom left of the sig didn't really fit in but i might be crazy. overall i like it.what's the thing in the middle of the sig though?

Re: New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:22 am
by Faiien
iono some kind of robot
the person who wanted the sig requested it

Re: New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 7:23 am
by TwelveEleven
Image isn't showing :x

Re: New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 11:31 am
by N1TROX
some text on there would make it look alot better

but anyway, the middle robot looks lighten'd, and maybe sharp the sides and lower the opacity just to make it a little less blurry.


other then that gj, alot of depth:)

Re: New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 1:47 pm
by SuicideGrl
ok, props on trying a new style.

my thoughts: the center of the sig (which i would imagine is your focal) is blurred, and the outside elements (machinery?) are sharp. it draws the eye away from your focal, if the center is indeed your focal to begin with.

your choice of c4d's is nice, but i think the placement is wrong. they don't flow very well; if you rotated them so that they were coming out from your focal i think it would improve the effect. also, don't be afraid to erase parts of the c4d that you don't like or need. it'll make it seem less like you just slapped it on there.

6.5/10 from me. if you more clearly define your focal and get a bit more flow going it will be filled with win XD

Re: New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 1:55 pm
by Faiien
lol i know this isnt my best
it only took me about an hour to complete compared to my other sigs which take me like 4
but it isnt mine so....XD
anyways thx for all the comments

Re: New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:07 pm
by TwelveEleven
I agree with SG, and my eyes are all over, no real focal.

Re: New Style From Me YAY

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:45 pm
by WaX
Try and smooth the edges of those c4ds, seem a lil too harsh for me.