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My new kit
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:10 am
by klemmyez
What u mean about my new sig and avarta?
Re: My new kit
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:11 am
by HOLLAstir
klemmyez wrote:please put all the drugs out of your hand
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:13 am
by klemmyez
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 5:06 pm
by fena
Awww, Holla, don't be mean.
@ klemmyez, I think the style of Sigs that you're making is different from the style that most people at our Forum make. IIRC, there's another Forum - I thinks it's name is XGen or something along those lines that does the same kind of art that you're doing.
Regardless, if you want some quick critique, here you go:
Sig:
I don't think that there's really a clear focal to it. I'm guessing that the focal point should be the thief, but he doesn't stand out in any particular way. When you make a Sig (or any art for that matter), most of the times, you want atleast one focal point. When the viewer first glances at it, his eyes should immediately be drawn to that focal point. It's the first thing he should look at. When I look at your Sig, I'm kinda glancing around, not sure what I'm supposed to be seeing.
Also, I think that the text needs better placement.
Avatar:
Can't really tell what it is.
Looks good, but I think that your style is just a little different from what most members of the AC here do. :]
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:50 pm
by klemmyez
thank fena
can you show me in your style, what you can do with the same picture, in color red/black.
@picture from korean sro, website.

Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:59 pm
by HOLLAstir
fena wrote:Awww, Holla, don't be mean.
@ klemmyez, I think the style of Sigs that you're making is different from the style that most people at our Forum make. IIRC, there's another Forum - I thinks it's name is XGen or something along those lines that does the same kind of art that you're doing.
Regardless, if you want some quick critique, here you go:
Sig: I don't think that there's really a clear focal to it. I'm guessing that the focal point should be the thief, but he doesn't stand out in any particular way. When you make a Sig (or any art for that matter), most of the times, you want atleast one focal point. When the viewer first glances at it, his eyes should immediately be drawn to that focal point. It's the first thing he should look at. When I look at your Sig, I'm kinda glancing around, not sure what I'm supposed to be seeing.
Also, I think that the text needs better placement.
Avatar: Can't really tell what it is.

Looks good, but I think that your style is just a little different from what most members of the AC here do. :]
I was just kidding! No hard feelings klemmy <3 I agree with fena.
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:00 pm
by cin
k KNEW holla was a wolf in sheep cloths!
<3 ;]
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:05 pm
by HOLLAstir
cin wrote:k KNEW holla was a wolf in sheep cloths!
<3 ;]
Jk i'm nothin but love baby <3
Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 12:25 am
by Faiien
lol how ironic
this week's theme is love
could this be a foreshadowing of the events to come? lol