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NSR ~ Christina
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:07 am
by christina
Well took mabye 30minutes
I think it looks clutered but i saved as wrong thing, so i really cant change anything at all. But i think it looks alright
And the text is a no no...
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 8:13 am
by the_wicked
i wish i could do photoshop
it looks good
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 8:33 am
by HOLLAstir
It's nice to see something different from you. Anyways, to me, it seems "unbalanced." You have clipping masks and smudging on the left a lot of flow from your render, then you have nothing on the right for the most part. The randomized lines going every which way is just a little too chaotic for me, and doesn't really fit the flow you established. No me gusta la text. Light source seems a bit harsh. I really liked the idea you had, reminds me of the idea I had with my Serenity sig. I just don't think it was executed too well. All in all, it's just so-so.
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:15 am
by christina
ya i didnt like it, ill mabye do something tommorow.
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:16 am
by Dystopia
Bottom left of her head looks, weird, keep trying your getting good
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:59 pm
by Faiien
way too many clipping masks and lines
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:03 pm
by TwelveEleven
Faiien wrote:way too many clipping masks and lines
Doesn't have to be if she makes the bg more like the render
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:58 pm
by Faiien
ok....i have no idea what you just said
she has way too many clipping masks on the render itself which is creating chaos within the render...
Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:36 pm
by TwelveEleven
Faiien wrote:ok....i have no idea what you just said
she has way too many clipping masks on the render itself which is creating chaos within the render...
If the bg is a little more like the render (colour and shape wise) then it can look better than it does on this bg