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NSR <> New Sig "GhostRider"

Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:11 pm
by Swindler
The green on "GhostRider" destroys the sig a little i know. But i couldnt remove it :/ Sry.

Well i think it is one of my sexiest sig right now i The Thing, good bye ;)


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Comment & Criticism Ty

Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:49 pm
by HOLLAstir
The green isn't what destroyed it, trust me. It just looks like a complete mess. You don't want your c4d to overlap your render then make it transparent like that. I don't really see a distinct flow. It's better then some over your others. I liked the concept, I know what you were trying to do it just wasn't executed very well. Keep practicing <3

Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:57 pm
by Millenium
You should stop lowering the ocacity on your focal. As the name says it needs to stand out.

I think you should start by
1. making the sigs less bright
2. make the background even more less bright
3. bring out the focal

Remember, background is just background.

Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 10:14 pm
by 0l3n
greecemilly wrote:You should stop lowering the ocacity on your focal.


Nuff said.