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7/10, the feeling is there, but it ain't complete. The part of the render is a little too bright for me, the text part looks really good though

No real distinct flow. You have your text going one way, bg going another then your render is in the lower right. I agree with the white patch, it's super bright and distracting. The aesthetic text is ok but the flow of it clashes with the rest. Not of a fan of the placement of the "perception" text. The render doesn't seem very well blended in. It's really "poppy." Also your lense flare, I see the ring circles and it's out of place and distracting to me. Sorry I want to feel it, but just can't. I'm having a terrible day. Sorry <3

HOLLAstir wrote:No real distinct flow. You have your text going one way, bg going another then your render is in the lower right. I agree with the white patch, it's super bright and distracting. The aesthetic text is ok but the flow of it clashes with the rest. Not of a fan of the placement of the "perception" text. The render doesn't seem very well blended in. It's really "poppy." Also your lense flare, I see the ring circles and it's out of place and distracting to me. Sorry I want to feel it, but just can't. I'm having a terrible day. Sorry <3

the render is supposed to be partially blocking the sunlight and so in that case the rings in lens flare are supposed to show as sunlight. eh not asking you to feel it. just asking you to rate and comment. thanks for the advice, i guess the "sun" is still too bright. also the light behind the text was part of the effect from the lens flare so eh. i'll try and erase that if it looks so bad

meh

You should try to add more flow to the backround and maybe tone down the bright light by the render.

I do like the contrast though and try adding a small border, migh look better, might not.

Also you might want to blur some parts with the blur tool to add to the depth some more.