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New Sig: Trapped

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 4:40 am
by HOLLAstir
Well plans got dropped tonight so made this. Pretty much a bunch of smudged and distorted c4d's brushing around the render all the good stuff. Tried something a little different.

C/C <3
Edit: Fixed

Image

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 4:49 am
by christina
Love it like i said ^^
except whats the white thing on her lip?

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:34 am
by durkadurka
shame ... she has no arm pit hair...


question ... yall tell me that my bg should have some kinda color with the render, but your bg and render are 2 different colors and shades of said color. how do you know when it " flows " right?

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:39 am
by aazumak
durkadurka wrote:shame ... she has no arm pit hair...


question ... yall tell me that my bg should have some kinda color with the render, but your bg and render are 2 different colors and shades of said color. how do you know when it " flows " right?



holla's isnt exactly the same, but its a black with white and green

the render is more orless black and white so he had to just pick a color, and he did a great job imo(the eyelids are greenish...)

but at you holla, good job man
text is great, but the background is only so so

the background is kinda plain, but i do like how it looks with teh render, you pulled it off nicely

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:44 am
by fena
aazumak wrote:
durkadurka wrote:shame ... she has no arm pit hair...


question ... yall tell me that my bg should have some kinda color with the render, but your bg and render are 2 different colors and shades of said color. how do you know when it " flows " right?



holla's isnt exactly the same, but its a black with white and green

the render is more orless black and white so he had to just pick a color, and he did a great job imo(the eyelids are greenish...)

but at you holla, good job man
text is great, but the background is only so so

the background is kinda plain, but i do like how it looks with teh render, you pulled it off nicely

Like usual, I agree with everything Aazumak said. Looks nice, and the color fits in nicely with the Sig. But this one, honestly, I guess it simply isn't my taste. It's a tad too emo and dark for me.

Still, it's a lovely Sig. I love how alot of your Sigs give off a vibe of simplicity, yet they're extremely aesthetically-pleasing as well. A good combination. And I haven't commented on your Killers Sig yet, but I especially love that one. I love the color choice.
You can probably tell that I like warm colors instead of dark colors.

At any rate, fantastic Sig once again. 7.5/10 from me on this one, just because of personal preference is all.

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:23 am
by HOLLAstir
<3 Thanks for the comments. I was going for simplicity, not emo, sorry if that was the vibe you got from it.

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:50 am
by BrokenSaint
You should fix the lighting. Theres light coming from behind her but none of it shows on her. I didn't really like the focal black and white. Everytime I looka t the sig my eye just automatically focuses on the background.

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:51 am
by 0nix
durkadurka wrote:shame ... she has no arm pit hair...


ewww

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:17 pm
by HOLLAstir
BrokenSaint wrote:You should fix the lighting. Theres light coming from behind her but none of it shows on her. I didn't really like the focal black and white. Everytime I looka t the sig my eye just automatically focuses on the background.


To each his own :P

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:39 pm
by durkadurka
HOLLAstir wrote:
BrokenSaint wrote:You should fix the lighting. Theres light coming from behind her but none of it shows on her. I didn't really like the focal black and white. Everytime I looka t the sig my eye just automatically focuses on the background.


To each his own :P



ok with the light thing... so far ive figured out how to put light on the render, and around it, but not from behind. how or where could i find out how to do that?

where as the light source is behind said render .. ?

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 7:53 pm
by HOLLAstir
Considering your little "outburst" Good luck having much help here for a little while.

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:44 pm
by aazumak
durkadurka wrote:



ok with the light thing... so far ive figured out how to put light on the render, and around it, but not from behind. how or where could i find out how to do that?

where as the light source is behind said render .. ?





this is holla's thread keep it about his sig, not what you can do....

well i feel like ur an ass durka, and like you pretend to do drugs but obviously dont, and all teh other crap uve been saying, i dont feel that i should help you at all, but its kind of obvious....

light , think light vs dark >.< if it is a light color, it is light.... just put it behind it.... kinda obvious no?

Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 10:08 pm
by ColourBlind
Love it :P

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 12:20 am
by BrokenSaint
HOLLAstir wrote:
BrokenSaint wrote:You should fix the lighting. Theres light coming from behind her but none of it shows on her. I didn't really like the focal black and white. Everytime I looka t the sig my eye just automatically focuses on the background.


To each his own :P


I hope that was a joke. Criticsm is criticism, it all depends on how you take it.

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:13 am
by HOLLAstir
BrokenSaint wrote:
HOLLAstir wrote:
BrokenSaint wrote:You should fix the lighting. Theres light coming from behind her but none of it shows on her. I didn't really like the focal black and white. Everytime I looka t the sig my eye just automatically focuses on the background.


To each his own :P


I hope that was a joke. Criticsm is criticism, it all depends on how you take it.


I directed that statement towards your opinion on the focal black and white part. Others feel differently. But I do agree with the lighting so thanks for that, it will be something for myself to work on in future works. It's Christmas! Relax! <3