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jessica 3??

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:23 am
by christina
Well i just got back, removed some masks, and differnt text, and took vocal out, any better?
Image

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:26 am
by ndrog2
her eyes look a little freaky

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:28 am
by christina
ndrog2 wrote:her eyes look a little freaky

i didnt do anything to them :D

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 5:56 am
by fena
Looking better. Still, a few things:

First of all, your text isn't much better. It's more obscure, and hidden - which is a good thing - but this time, it's MUCH too hidden. The font is white, against a light-colored background, making it almost invisible. Most of the times, you want your font to not be the focal point, but still be the second thing that the viewer looks at. I had to struggle to see the font; at first, I thought it was another clipping mask.
To get a font color that matches your Sig, you could just make your text a clipping mask as well. While you're trying out all those clipping masks, you might want to try that. See how it looks.

Other than that, I think it looks pretty good. But her eyes do look a bit freaky.
:P


~ And on a side note, you don't have to keep on creating threads, you know. You can just edit your first one with your new versions, hehe. Just thought that I'd point that out.

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:01 am
by christina
ya sory about that ^^

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 9:16 am
by HavinFunSince89
face looks blurry

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 11:32 am
by ColourBlind
Much better then ver. 2 :P

Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 2:05 pm
by cin
most of the time, its better to start all over than to just remove some things
in the current piece, you know...

Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 4:26 am
by Rizla
you need a different/new render.