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NSR ~ Blue Ballz

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 3:12 am
by BrokenSaint
simple abstract lol.

Image

C/C?

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 4:00 am
by Aby
You've got one thing right there.

No context, too plain.

Also, whatever you did to it that makes it look like you just went over it excessively with the spray can tool in ms paint, never do it again.

3/10

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 4:15 am
by BrokenSaint
Aby wrote:You've got one thing right there.

No context, too plain.

Also, whatever you did to it that makes it look like you just went over it excessively with the spray can tool in ms paint, never do it again.

3/10


With all due respect, I don't think you have any sense of artistic value. Perhaps you've never used Photoshop before? And the MS paint comment is an insult to me. I'm sorry but, that wasn't constructive criticism. :\

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 4:26 am
by Aby
Any criticism can be constructive criticism, it all depends on whether you see the donut or the hole.

It's on you whether to take it or ignore it. What doesn't change is that it's there.

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 4:50 am
by Dugu
Aby wrote:Any criticism can be constructive criticism, it all depends on whether you see the donut or the hole.

It's on you whether to take it or ignore it. What doesn't change is that it's there.

Not true, constructive criticism would help Saint on his next project, give him something more to think about and something to work on.

You've got one thing right there.

No context, too plain.

Also, whatever you did to it that makes it look like you just went over it excessively with the spray can tool in ms paint, never do it again.

3/10

If the symbol in the middle isn't good use of negative space, or "context' then you need to define for us your concept of 'context'. Abstract is context, the blue 'balls' is context.

Also, the high contrast and saturation takes this pretty far from plain, albeit it's a bit monotone.

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 9:42 am
by Waisha
Hey aby.

5 EASY WAYS TO GET BANNED FROM SRF wrote:5) Be a constant problem. Flame in nearly every post. Accuse everyone who starts a topic of being a bot. Spam ridiculous nonsense at any opportunity. Do stupid things to intentionally a) piss off the mod team or b) piss off another forum member. Inflate your post count with garbage. Post disturbing, inappropriate, or NSFW (not safe for work) images in threads, avatars, sigs, etc. If you intentionally make more work for us, you'll find yourself banned.


*hints SG*

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 5:36 pm
by pineapples
****, Broken, that Sig is hella sexy.

10/10 hands down from me. Maybe it's just personal opinion, but damn, you did a great job for the effect that you were going for.

And the rest of you, methinks you should lay off Aby a bit. I just saw him giving his opinion was all, and that was that he didn't like it. I completely disagree, but since when have we not been allowed to give our opinions on this Forum?

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:02 pm
by 0l3n
Only thing I can see thats not so good is the "a", some more detail would make it way better.

And may I ask what the text sais at the bottom? :P

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:04 pm
by Aby
Waisha wrote:Hey aby.

5 EASY WAYS TO GET BANNED FROM SRF wrote:5) Be a constant problem. Flame in nearly every post. Accuse everyone who starts a topic of being a bot. Spam ridiculous nonsense at any opportunity. Do stupid things to intentionally a) piss off the mod team or b) piss off another forum member. Inflate your post count with garbage. Post disturbing, inappropriate, or NSFW (not safe for work) images in threads, avatars, sigs, etc. If you intentionally make more work for us, you'll find yourself banned.


*hints SG*


If you have a problem with me, address it to me, in a PM.

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:40 pm
by cin
0l3n wrote:And may I ask what the text sais at the bottom? :P

all i can see is "BS".. that stand for "BullShit" right? :P hehe

nicely done broken. you get 7.5 points from me just for originality.

total 8.5/10

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:18 pm
by [SD]Kratos
I think you did better!

I think it would look better without the reversed G at middle...or whatever logo that is :P

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 8:12 pm
by CrimsonNuker
Just a little reminder.
http://ygen.jonanin.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2878

Forum Raiding Is Encouraged!

Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 10:17 pm
by BrokenSaint
The 'Bs' stands for my name lol and the subtext is there for decoration. I'll tell what it says after i get back from school lol.

Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 4:49 am
by SuicideGrl
CrimsonNuker wrote:Forum Raiding Is Encouraged!

no, it's not.

maturity, however, is. so are differences of opinion, but i would like all involved here to realize that in an artistic forum such as this one, simply saying that you don't like something, or rating it low, etc., is pretty useless to the person asking for feedback. if you think something could be improved, then say how. otherwise you are just being negative, and this is one of the only places i post on this forum regularly because it's the only one that's not negative all the time.

not sure what constructive criticism is? i invite you all to read Dugu's reply to my recent thread. useful, concise comments free of vaguities like "too plain", for example, and full of specific things that could be improved, along with some suggestions as to how.

Aby, from what i have seen of you on this forum, you could do with a dose of sensitivity, or at least turn down your nasty knob a bit.

Waisha, you know better than to post concerns like that publicly. PM me next time.

CrimsonNuker, while your defense of BrokenSaint is commendable, please don't create problems for EITHER of the forums in question by trying to start an inter-forum war.



<sigh> please play nice kids.

Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:39 pm
by CrimsonNuker
SuicideGrl wrote:
CrimsonNuker wrote:Forum Raiding Is Encouraged!

no, it's not.

maturity, however, is. so are differences of opinion, but i would like all involved here to realize that in an artistic forum such as this one, simply saying that you don't like something, or rating it low, etc., is pretty useless to the person asking for feedback. if you think something could be improved, then say how. otherwise you are just being negative, and this is one of the only places i post on this forum regularly because it's the only one that's not negative all the time.

not sure what constructive criticism is? i invite you all to read Dugu's reply to my recent thread. useful, concise comments free of vaguities like "too plain", for example, and full of specific things that could be improved, along with some suggestions as to how.

Aby, from what i have seen of you on this forum, you could do with a dose of sensitivity, or at least turn down your nasty knob a bit.

Waisha, you know better than to post concerns like that publicly. PM me next time.

CrimsonNuker, while your defense of BrokenSaint is commendable, please don't create problems for EITHER of the forums in question by trying to start an inter-forum war.



<sigh> please play nice kids.


It was a joke T___T

Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:04 am
by magisuns
Ignore Abys typical ranting...
I think its gorgeous =)
i'm giving it a 9.5\10 :wink:
Simple but spectacular :)