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NSR ~ spacey
Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:18 pm
by binnosh
trying to improove my talents so i've tried something new :p
c&c please
and yes text needs work..
Edit:
new C&C please :p
new text and light
changed contrast a bit
Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 2:55 pm
by TwelveEleven
6/10
1. improve the txt
2. brighter light at the end of the tunnel
3. should be more tunnelish
4. think it looks as if you pasted txt over it
Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 3:25 pm
by rek
More depth. Kill the text.
Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 3:44 pm
by binnosh
made a couple changes, lemme know what you think of it now,
tnx for the previous comments:p think it looks better now, even tho text editing isn't one of my best tricks
