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so after looking at tuts and things like that i kinda tried to add what i had read/learned together. rate it please, tell me what i can improve on ect ect :)

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Really nice cept a lil too big for me :P

8? I dono, I'm not good with rating things
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the word "ironman" kinda looks outta place ,unno it could just be me but it looked odd to me at first glance other wise really nice. :)

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There is two focals in your sig, and thats a bad thing. And when you choose colours choose ones that match with the sig. And the flow could you some work, its the was things go.. direction.
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And the flow could you some work, its the was things go.. direction.


WTF? Does not Compute o_O
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Direction... You see how ironman looks like he is flying left? but you have lines going evywhere.. these lines conflict with the "flow".
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Foilin wrote:
And the flow could use some work, its the way things go.. direction.


WTF? Does not Compute o_O


I think thats what he meant

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Post by [SD]Kratos »

something u can easily improve is the text :)

Now about the flow, if the lines were going in same direction as ironman, it would be really better i think.

Did u use a fractal creation program or just a filter?
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Brushes, my friend.
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reK wrote:Brushes, my friend.


fractal brushes? thats gay!

Better create ur own fractal and then put it as layer :O me thinks
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Post by HavinFunSince89 »

I have just one thing to say this is just like what rizla said before.
"It looks like strawberry-kiwi puke" try to use colors that match with the sig.

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I believe he DID choose colors that matched with the focal, just the color balance needs work I guess.

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Just select color and get it over with.

Also, fractal brushes=easy, making your own would take work.
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