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School project ~ product poster
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:34 am
by cin
school project
ok. this is a school project im workin on.
the product is a little machine i worked on at my internship company, the
actual product is the scent coming from it. i want to make it clear that this
is the product, and i want to make clear without using words, that its a scent
diffusing machine.
my idea
now, about my idea, its the machine with pentooled lines comin from it, giving
the people a feeling of flow gowing out of the machine and growing bigger.
in between i want to create a feeling of different smells in colors. i chose for
the colors purple/red/green/blue; purple still missing atm. this poster will be
in A0 sizes in the end, i'd just like some comments on what i got so far.
planning
i am workin on a clipping mask to go over the colored parts to make em look
like bubbles ending up in small bubbles n fading out, but school got pshop 7
n that one dont have clippin mask tool yet -.-
anyways, some comments on this please, and some tips on what i should
do better/differently.
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:59 am
by Deacon
Is that you surfing there?
Nice poster xD
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 10:22 am
by BrokenSaint
The lines are pixelated. Maybe it could use a fourth pic?
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 10:26 am
by cin
hehe pixelated maybe cause i resized it quickly to save 56k-ers from crashin
anyways, i now workin on it still.. added some reflection on the bottom so the
machine isnt floatin anymore
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:36 pm
by Shadowman20818
Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:41 pm
by cin
Shadowman20818 wrote:Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.
EKEKE
thats the product
thats like.. the whole pity about the project.. its gotta have a product u worked
on like durin an internship.. -.-
anyways, photoshop @ school sucks. dont even have all tools i need for this
thingy i wanna make. anyways, keep the tips comin. glad yall likes it so far
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:44 pm
by TwelveEleven
cin wrote:Shadowman20818 wrote:Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.
EKEKE
thats the product
thats like.. the whole pity about the project.. its gotta have a product u worked
on like durin an internship.. -.-
anyways, photoshop @ school sucks. dont even have all tools i need for this
thingy i wanna make. anyways, keep the tips comin. glad yall likes it so far
2 words:
Remote Desktop!
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:44 pm
by cin
TwelveEleven wrote:cin wrote:Shadowman20818 wrote:Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.
EKEKE
thats the product
thats like.. the whole pity about the project.. its gotta have a product u worked
on like durin an internship.. -.-
anyways, photoshop @ school sucks. dont even have all tools i need for this
thingy i wanna make. anyways, keep the tips comin. glad yall likes it so far
2 words:
Remote Desktop!
2 more words
laptop dead
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:47 pm
by Shadowman20818
cin wrote:TwelveEleven wrote:cin wrote:Shadowman20818 wrote:Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.
EKEKE
thats the product
thats like.. the whole pity about the project.. its gotta have a product u worked
on like durin an internship.. -.-
anyways, photoshop @ school sucks. dont even have all tools i need for this
thingy i wanna make. anyways, keep the tips comin. glad yall likes it so far
2 words:
Remote Desktop!
2 more words
laptop dead
sexy shadowman
Maybe change the background from black? Black and green are hideous together for me X.X
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:48 pm
by cin
hmmm well black n green CAN look pretty awesome..
i will try some more out tomorrow.
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:58 pm
by Millenium
Great job with the poster so far cin. I'm totally art-deaf I get amazed by photoshop stuff easily
Whats supposed to go in the left-most bubble right beside the strawberries?
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 10:01 pm
by cin
i fixt some coffee, chocolates n brownies in there
will post tomorrow. it looks very tasty.. imagine that on A0 size
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 10:05 pm
by Millenium
That yellow thing doesn't look like a scent diffusing machine....just yet
Do you have a design for the lable or something?
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 10:06 pm
by cin
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 11:49 pm
by Xyzzzy
$235.00AUD each
holy shit
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 4:52 am
by Dystopia
cin wrote:hehe pixelated maybe cause i resized it quickly to save 56k-ers from crashin
Your so considerate,
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 7:07 am
by 0l3n
You can see the edge on every image, erase more with a soft brush.
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 10:07 am
by Luoma
0l3n wrote:You can see the edge on every image, erase more with a soft brush.
your right, the leaves and the cherries. not sure about the surfing..
otherwise good job :]
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 10:10 am
by cin
nice find on that guys. will work on that asap
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:44 pm
by 0l3n
Dont want to be a pain in the ass but here you go if you havnt noticed.
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:45 pm
by dom
Those aero thinks are so sexy. I want one.
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:47 pm
by 0l3n
dom wrote:Those aero thinks are so sexy. I want one.
me to!
Cin can you buy me one.
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:53 pm
by dom
things
Next time don't quote me when I have a typo, I can't edit it away
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:54 pm
by Snudge
dom wrote:things
Next time don't quote me when I have a typo, I can't edit it away
We still
you.
Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 4:17 pm
by 0l3n
dom wrote:things
Next time don't quote me when I have a typo, I can't edit it away
Didnt notice
Its going in signature right away.
Just kidding.